Writers Pain.

[Poeta Demonio]

Okay upping for more feed...

But this time please don't tease me into giving definitions if you already know the meanings of them ... thank you.

[Nicasso]

wow you know im not gonna lie to u. this has been one of the best ive seen in a while. there isnt much other than structure tht u needa work on. 9/10

keep up the good work

I agree man but not and 9 out of 10 and 10/10 your vocab was
just mind blowin and it seems like you put and lot of work into
this piece mayne Great job am have to say HOF it's just Great.
Keep up the work man I enjoyed reading this shit..................

[Poeta Demonio]

Thanks man, upping.

[kpwilsp]

Holy Shit man. How can somethin like this be quick? The complexity was amazing and some of the best metaphors I've ever read. Not much to improve on this, great vocab, unique style. I've gotta say this is one of the best poems I've seen here man. Great job and keep writin.

[Poeta Demonio]

Thanks alot man, as i said earlier, you people are the reason i write, not for HoF or nominations, but for the people.

Thanks man.

[Neruda II]

You're doing good.

I like the imagery, you're right, we do have similar styles. You need to work on your structure. You have to find a right place to break off the lines so the emphasis is on the message/emotion, instead of having to make a tiny font just to fit it all in one post. I'm impressed. I could see you elevating well in the next couple of months. Don't try to fit too many adjectives in one line, it becomes fluff after a while. Keep concepts and metaphors strong. Thanks for the feedback. Everything is solid.

Stop by the business thread of Po'Ethics one of these days. Drop the other crews.

[Poeta Demonio]

Thanks alot man, i actually really apreciate a talented writer commented, thanks.

[Poeta Demonio]

Oh btw GM... On atticus's request i made this into a topical with alot better structure...

You should check it out man.

Atticus and Bounce have been really helping me recently... I think it's starting to pay off man.

[Poeta Demonio]

Upping...

[Poeta Demonio]

Upping...

[Temp Gurl]

THat was a great poem the vocab was truly of the chain if that a quick poem then what a regular one. The image in my mind were racing with this poem and i love that i really enjoyed reading this, hope to check out more of your pieces.

[Poeta Demonio]

Thanks alot... Upping.

[Poeta Demonio]

Upping.

[Poeta Demonio]

Upping for feed please...

[RhymeSwift]

commin at it even more......................lovin your poetry.,keep it up.peep my shit when ever ya can.i would really appreciate it.thanks...p-e-a-c-e......