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g/l...........
U.S.P.
lilcapone
10lines
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g/l...........
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checkin in...
ok check
30 min., lets do this
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Kit Cloudkicker
Look here, Im fucking with Lil Al Capone directly in the skin
Too bad at the end of this saga, Lil Capone aint gunna be on top and win
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Look at the person who made this, read his last sig if u want information
Forget doin it out of Good Will, This is str8 up my last Salvation
Lil Capone? What happened to you, why cant you be big and scary
You might have hopes of winning this battle in sight, but think of contrary
Me winning this battle is gunna show the weaker outcast, its just initial
Saving your verse for another contender? Now that would be something beneficial
I hate to do this kid, putting you out of your misery with the last bar in the story
You might have been something big on another site, but you can’t relive past glory
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Kit Cloudkicker
United States Pusher?/ more like united states loser. im gonna threat this bush and drop bombs/ everybody get ready to tell wut happened to this guy specially his moms/ tell her that he went out like a coward/ that he got lyrically raped like an inmate gettin raped in the showers/ but on a positieve note he lasted hours/ tall men be fallin down like the twin towers/ lyrically masterbatin my mind till it bust/ piers through ur skin like a knife covered in rust/ ur direction defeats the purpose/ like bush takin bullets for the secret service.
both were good, usp had good vocabs. but cap had better punches. cap put ya shit in bars.
Imma say this belongs to usp
V/USP
v// usp
easy battle usp won all categories
lilcapone elevate kid, fix ur structure, get better punches
hit up the sig wit sum honest votes ... thanks
up #1
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Kit Cloudkicker
Look here, Im fucking with Lil Al Capone directly in the skin
Too bad at the end of this saga, Lil Capone aint gunna be on top and win
filler...2/10
Look at the person who made this, read his last sig if u want information
Forget doin it out of Good Will, This is str8 up my last Salvation
filler...2/10
Lil Capone? What happened to you, why cant you be big and scary
You might have hopes of winning this battle in sight, but think of contrary
decent....4/10
Me winning this battle is gunna show the weaker outcast, its just initial
Saving your verse for another contender? Now that would be something beneficial
wordplay....ehhh punch....3/10
I hate to do this kid, putting you out of your misery with the last bar in the story
You might have been something big on another site, but you can’t relive past glory
ehhh...3/10
score=14
United States Pusher?/ more like united states loser. im gonna threat this bush and drop bombs/ everybody get ready to tell wut happened to this guy specially his moms/
no...1/10
tell her that he went out like a coward/ that he got lyrically raped like an inmate gettin raped in the showers/
no...1/10
but on a positieve note he lasted hours/ tall men be fallin down like the twin towers/
no..1/10
lyrically masterbatin my mind till it bust/ piers through ur skin like a knife covered in rust/
no..1/10
ur direction defeats the purpose/ like bush takin bullets for the secret service.
ehhh...3/10
score=7
vote=u.s.p
clear victory
yall go vote on these..1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=285609
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=285609
Edward S. Casey a.k.a (E)=m(C)2
up #2
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Kit Cloudkicker
up #3...Vote ppl please, dont Sleep on it
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Kit Cloudkicker
I'm not going to break down my vote...
v// USP for better everything
capone, make your lines longer, better vocab, better structure, and better punches...
meh, ok drop USP...
Mondo Thugs l The Truth
If I'm too simple, then you just dont get the basics.
up #4
hit it up
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Kit Cloudkicker
vote u.s.p better punches betetr vocab better verse no hate
V/U.S.P .. better verse .. vocab,personals and punches where all good ........ liked the verse .. one sided in my eyes! No hate!
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