Ghetto Life

[Seneka]

My teardrops create a tranquil pond

Misery materialized, my ambitions gone

I think I'll kill myself and end it all

A permanent respiting from my life

Let the lead enter into my brain

Let my body go numb

Let my pain fade away and vanish

Into the whisper of the winds

The world will never mourn my passing

Not even raise an eye to look

Life will go on as it always has

And always will

[.HeavenlyTouch.]

Aw. This is such a deep poem. It gave me the feeling like you're giving up. The whole mood of it was just so sad. And you did a good job capturing that. It's short and sweet, but very affective and well written. Thanks for the read

[Seneka]

Don't let it fade

I'm uppin'

[~SaDe~]

^^^ im bringin it back up 4 you my nigga
but this was tight short as fuck maybe if you add more to your shit it'll come out more decent o read wasnt much to read but from what you ahd you came pretty decent... the vocab was tight but i felt that you couldve brought the subject out more deeper to my opinion and you dont need all those spaces in beween everything okay