ILL~o~KWENT VS. yung ghost

[ILL~O~KWENT]

10 lines
no feeding

due in one hour

[ILL~O~KWENT]

checking in.

[Nashvillain]

my bad,check

[Nashvillain]

look...ima drop half ass on this cat cuzz i know he a rookie
you aint beatin me son,ya best bets 2 play hookie
this dude make me laught....he a str8 joke
ya rhymes wouldnt be cold if it was 30 below and u was blowin smoke
the only way he could win is if the voters got a pay-off
dont excpect super bowl material when this dude couldnt make the play-offs
i never talk shit cuzz i just let my shots speak
im not even gonna peep ya verse cuzz i know u droped weak
i keep hollows in the chamber,pop 1,watch this dummy fall
ya punches gonna miss
this dudes so weak,my punches worth 2 like a money ball

[ILL~O~KWENT]

im keeping it cool,..ILL's a beast and it's true,
you only think that you spittin, cause you speak with a drool,
make this geek eat my stool, cause yung enjoys talking shit,
i employ awesome scripts,,and yung plays the 'part pussy' like exposin a clit,
im annoyed at you bitch,..asking for votes is no surprise,
this ghost couldnt 'bring the noise' if he was a poltergeist,
beef?,, i pulverize,..plus your styles 'butt',like farts and rears kid,
only time yung's 'on point', is when i take his heart and spear it(spirit),
be smart and fear this, queer bitch, you'll be smothered and beat,
your names 'ghost' cause after this battle, you'll be covered in sheets,

[ILL~O~KWENT]

thanks for the battle yung, uppin for VOTES#1

[Antonio Banderas]

man..Yall need to elevate somewhat

ILL~o~KWENT - you had a better rhyme schema, but the content within your punches was better so you took this battle. Even though the structure was good, your verse did not flow well at all. I would read some of the wordplay and it was so lame I was like WTF. However, you had enough to take the win.

yung ghost - you had the better flow and it read easy. But, the punches were not as strong as Ill-o-kwent. The structure was great, you just need to work on fresh concepts.

Vote - Ill-o-kwent

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322468


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[ILL~O~KWENT]

uppin for votes#2

[RaidersArk]

Vote Ill___..

Better punches.....no hate but elevate.................
Pretty good batttle... the best shot was..

----->be smart and fear this, queer bitch, you'll be smothered and beat,
your names 'ghost' cause after this battle, you'll be covered in sheets,

7/10 finisher.....not bad at all

[blitz905]

imma vote an yes my boy antonio is right but over all if i say who won it be kwent he had better rhymes an used better syllabol rhymes an shit so over all my vote goes too kwent

[ILL~O~KWENT]

bumpin for votes #3

[Plot]

Yung
look...ima drop half ass on this cat cuzz i know he a rookie
you aint beatin me son,ya best bets 2 play hookie
~ehh, almost
this dude make me laught....he a str8 joke
ya rhymes wouldnt be cold if it was 30 below and u was blowin smoke
~ehh, almost, (wears the smoke come into that?)
the only way he could win is if the voters got a pay-off
dont excpect super bowl material when this dude couldnt make the play-offs
~ok, not a flip tho
i never talk shit cuzz i just let my shots speak
im not even gonna peep ya verse cuzz i know u droped weak
~blah
i keep hollows in the chamber,pop 1,watch this dummy fall
ya punches gonna miss
this dudes so weak,my punches worth 2 like a money ball
~ehh

Ill
im keeping it cool,..ILL's a beast and it's true,
you only think that you spittin, cause you speak with a drool,
~lol, ok
make this geek eat my stool, cause yung enjoys talking shit,
i employ awesome scripts,,and yung plays the 'part pussy' like exposin a clit,
~ehh ok, pussy lines are played tho
im annoyed at you bitch,..asking for votes is no surprise,
this ghost couldnt 'bring the noise' if he was a poltergeist,
~not bad
beef?,, i pulverize,..plus your styles 'butt',like farts and rears kid,
only time yung's 'on point', is when i take his heart and spear it(spirit),
~ok, coulda tied in the 'spirit' a little more
be smart and fear this, queer bitch, you'll be smothered and beat,
your names 'ghost' cause after this battle, you'll be covered in sheets,
~good
V-Ill

[ILL~O~KWENT]

bump #4

[ILL~O~KWENT]

bump #5... come on peeps, we need some votes