Yeah we've both lost twice, my zest will best what you write
I'll add a one to your two.. like we're testing a mic
So kid get out the league, your showing fatigue and I resent this
You're hanging on by your teeth, and MM made me your dentist
So don't try to prevent it, from now I'm denting who challenge me
Bitch fuck a world of pain.. I'm blowing up your whole galaxy
and that truth be told could have been dope if you'd taken more time to word it properly, but i can tell you rushed your verse, cause nothing was up to your par.
vs.
I saw a pic of ya child n' after talkin' with nieces
it looks like a million bucks...
... couldn't cure those foul diseases
Your a dumbfuck, but see my rap skills have soared,
for two cents I'll give ya a piece of my mind...
... and all of yours
the million bucks line is iffy too, cause its not that witty. and to make not on the rest of your couplet... telling him he has a gift, but its not his kid was stupid. one, your complimenting him [even if you DO go on to make fun of his kid], two, theres been so many jokes to com about his kids, and this one was nothing special at all. you gotta bring some pretty amazing disses about his family anymore. and most importantly, third... you should have flipped it to where his kid WAS the gift. as in gifted, as in retarded. that would have been dope. pass away wasnt just corny, it was the whole field. all gravy could have been good, but your twist killed it [com is a skinny bastard, you've seen the pics you said, so you should know.] toot your own horn was used badly, it could have been good though, and the last concept is so played... the style punch it is. to old for my likings. you had that one dope ass line, and if you'd have brought more to the table like that, you would have won easily.
vote - com stop caring so much though to get pissed enough to sign out. and if you dont want shit like this to happen again, stop halfassing your verses, cause it might have put you at 0-3.
Originally Posted by DaTrusHurtz
