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Criticize
Ace.
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People trying to be the king, but the ace is back.
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People trying to be the king, but the ace is back.
Futures In Affect,Check The Punchline To Realize How Hard Breathin's-BecomesOriginally Posted by Ace
Cuz DODGIN sh*t
...Makes Me Prone 2 "GRABBIN LIFE BY THE HORNS" like Squeezin Ya Lungz
Predict-Doubt, U Kicked-Out? Wait Until I "RE:BOOT" you Missing A Few Components
Cuz Past D/R Votes Prove Dude "Bi-Ohs!! For Battles" Like Descriptions Of Opponents
Vision 4 Text? Give U A "Crooked-I", See A Win Or Loss? Which Ones Farthest
& Ace Got Old-Head Skills? Kid U'll "Mos Def Catch Nas/naws'" Like Def Jam Artists
Think Ya Dope? Give Ya A Big "N.O!!" Like Southern States, Kid Ur A Newbz Equal
& Its Deja Vu, Cuz I'll Just "Jabba A Bad Plot" Like Destroyin' StarWars Sequels
I'll MuRedeR in tEXT..you Thnik im The UnderDog in This?lyrcally Kill Your Wife
Cause its obvious You take domince on the net so its clear you need to
Last edited by Infamouz; July 24th, 2006 at 02:44 PM
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g/l dude up for you
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Bitch, get slapped. you suck, your text is so wack
i said why even post? So he responded with that^
no joke, i slay throats.. this fag pming for vote's
yea you win battle's..
with self glory, and fake qoute's.
who next? i'll criticize your text.. you dam lame
while your editing.....
you should add the . to my name.*
hold on, let me leave your record with a dent
i quoted you^, and i havent seen a quotable since
true story.. another loss for you, fear me kid
phade is just a herb/pussy.. period.
*lmao at fake quote's..
Anyway, dont get it. Dont vote.
People trying to be the king, but the ace is back.
no joke, i slay throats.. this fag pming for vote's
yea you win battle's..
with self glory, and fake qoute's.
LMAo nice because it's true.
vs
Futures In Affect,Check The Punchline To Realize How Hard Breathin's-Becomes
Cuz DODGIN sh*t
...Makes Me Prone 2 "GRABBIN LIFE BY THE HORNS" like Squeezin Ya Lungz
This was your best line but meh.. It needed re-wording & needed to be ALOT shorter
I have to say really one-sided battle here. Ace took this with alot more personal's which were effective & direct punche's. Crit you have to stop DECORATING your verse. That shit is just wack. I have to say don't extend your line's so large neither. & come more witty with punche's.
v/Ace.
V//Ace
he had alot more personals crit u need to work on harder punchlines. he got with that personal part cuz that was so true lol. but its all good ur elevate
uppity #1
People trying to be the king, but the ace is back.
Uppin. Leave link's, car key's w/e make's you happy.. Shit.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ace
Fuckin Nebs..lmao
Futures In Affect,Check The Punchline To Realize How Hard Breathin's-Becomes
Cuz DODGIN sh*t
...Makes Me Prone 2 "GRABBIN LIFE BY THE HORNS" like Squeezin Ya Lungz
ok
Predict-Doubt, U Kicked-Out? Wait Until I "RE:BOOT" you Missing A Few Components
Cuz Past D/R Votes Prove Dude "Bi-Ohs!! For Battles" Like Descriptions Of Opponents
ok
Vision 4 Text? Give U A "Crooked-I", See A Win Or Loss? Which Ones Farthest
& Ace Got Old-Head Skills? Kid U'll "Mos Def Catch Nas/naws'" Like Def Jam Artists
No
Think Ya Dope? Give Ya A Big "N.O!!" Like Southern States, Kid Ur A Newbz Equal
& Its Deja Vu, Cuz I'll Just "Jabba A Bad Plot" Like Destroyin' StarWars Sequels
meh
I'll MuRedeR in tEXT..you Thnik im The UnderDog in This?lyrcally Kill Your Wife
Cause its obvious You take domince on the net so its clear you need to
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ace
get a life
No
Your wording was really off the whole verse. Work on that man.
vs.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Criticize
nothin it just looks funy wit all that shit in it
Bitch, get slapped. you suck, your text is so wack
i said why even post? So he responded with that^
ok
no joke, i slay throats.. this fag pming for vote's
yea you win battle's..
with self glory, and fake qoute's.
lol.
who next? i'll criticize your text.. you dam lame
while your editing.....
you should add the . to my name.*
lol. Shows fake quotes thing.
hold on, let me leave your record with a dent
i quoted you^, and i havent seen a quotable since
ok
true story.. another loss for you, fear me kid
phade is just a herb/pussy.. period.
meh
If I could vote it would definitely be for Ace.
Futures In Affect,Check The Punchline To Realize How Hard Breathin's-Becomes
Cuz DODGIN sh*t
...Makes Me Prone 2 "GRABBIN LIFE BY THE HORNS" like Squeezin Ya Lungz
no
Predict-Doubt, U Kicked-Out? Wait Until I "RE:BOOT" you Missing A Few Components
Cuz Past D/R Votes Prove Dude "Bi-Ohs!! For Battles" Like Descriptions Of Opponents
nope
Vision 4 Text? Give U A "Crooked-I", See A Win Or Loss? Which Ones Farthest
& Ace Got Old-Head Skills? Kid U'll "Mos Def Catch Nas/naws'" Like Def Jam Artists
ok
Think Ya Dope? Give Ya A Big "N.O!!" Like Southern States, Kid Ur A Newbz Equal
& Its Deja Vu, Cuz I'll Just "Jabba A Bad Plot" Like Destroyin' StarWars Sequels
nope
I'll MuRedeR in tEXT..you Thnik im The UnderDog in This?lyrcally Kill Your Wife
Cause its obvious You take domince on the net so its clear you need to
You suck
vs.
Bitch, get slapped. you suck, your text is so wack
i said why even post? So he responded with that^
nice
no joke, i slay throats.. this fag pming for vote's
yea you win battle's..
with self glory, and fake qoute's.
Nice
who next? i'll criticize your text.. you dam lame
while your editing.....
you should add the . to my name.*
ROTFL Its true
hold on, let me leave your record with a dent
i quoted you^, and i havent seen a quotable since
lol
true story.. another loss for you, fear me kid
phade is just a herb/pussy.. period.
ok
My vote goes to ace he had a few good punches like the fake quote line. Made me laugh. Critize i thought you were better then this. you didnt have any really good punches all meh lines. Your lines were also very stretched, fix that up.
v.Ace.
Ace, you won just cuz Criticize is an idiot. Lawl. and Ace, you should have used that against him COMPLETELY! I mean, I would have milked that for all it was worth, to make him really feel like a dumbass, then I would have punched him with a big one towards the end... but thats just me. Good job anyway though Ace, and as for Criticize... you suck. Lawl. I wanna battle you Crit, you make sure to just cut off the last letter of my name, it'll be kool. ^_^ I don't have enough posts to vote... so BLAH!
I am haunted by dreams...
Wild streams of a Devil's storm gleams to me
His blade upon the arising sun's dawn
Is beautifully mystikal, as if I was in love
With a doom which has struck my skull
Yet, the shock of a grim war
Has left me as a lost cause
In the middle of all this blood and gore
The life I used to live is at an end... too far
I've gone so long without a pulse...
-Namic
Lawl, then I would be Cash-O, Tee' Hee'.
I am haunted by dreams...
Wild streams of a Devil's storm gleams to me
His blade upon the arising sun's dawn
Is beautifully mystikal, as if I was in love
With a doom which has struck my skull
Yet, the shock of a grim war
Has left me as a lost cause
In the middle of all this blood and gore
The life I used to live is at an end... too far
I've gone so long without a pulse...
-Namic
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