Changed since I've been Unchained

[ITawAPuddyKat]

Reality is talking-

chained in this shell for so long, decaying
from the inside looking out. Weighing
the pain onto myself in this darkness
feeling hopeless, heartless and dateless.
I chase love, but tired, cause its too far,
my arms weaken-ache when loves goes afar.
I walk on this road, plowing leafs of hate,
plain black with no color of happiness taste.
my tears are felt but cannot be seen,
cries can't be heard in this world of debris.
Laughter is what I hear in the distance,
I scream-Response?, Nothing. Just silence.
Then that silence interrupted by the drums,
drums of abusement and the sound of hum.
My path shakes and I wonder-feeling numb?
Floor hisses like a snake with hot venom.
A outline-like a knife-cuts my world into a hole,
asking me to step forward and let me eat u whole.
I walk advance with conscious and urge of worry,
a knot in my stomach as I enter this portal.

I'm a victim of hate, disgraced by this world today,
stepped outside with rainbow colors
then I sensed stink-Judgment odor.
Black clouds starts to form
million eyes on me-here comes the storm
Lightning bolts coming quick
My skin starts to tear and slit.
Blood Leaked from my lips
the same ones I kiss females with.
I'm going deeper of this hate depth.
Give up?-there's none of me left-yes.
"Daddy please stop!!!"

Changed since my reality has been unchained,
No more kissing girls or giving them brains.
By force of brutality and abusement, I gave up.
Now girls looking at me like "What the fuck!?"
My lips now kissing dicks of 8 inches,
Reality did this, I'm through with fucking bitches.

Will get Links tomorrow (Saturday)...I'm so tired, please leave this open for a day.

[sILLable]

im lovin this most def,the content of everypiece i read from you is above par,very intelligently wrote,vocab,beautiful,rhyme scheme was on point, wordplay was tight, i loved how it wasnt very complicated but it was still ill,the simplicity of some of your bars were there but it worked so well,very nice piece as usual,keep droppin tha hottness.~1~

[Knukkles]

real nice ryme sceme

nice flow

nice wordplay

[Cody Nash]

So ..the person turned gay. Lol, odd storyline but VERY well written. the lines seemed short but I liked the style a lot more than most. It was a decent read. I'm not into that gay's stuff but it's alright for what it is. I dunno, it's good. Simple words fused with a storyline. DEFFINATLY not what I expected ..way to keep the reader guessing. Keep it dope ..

!Nash, link in the sig ..(Bottom)

[EyeCandy]

So ..the person turned gay. Lol, odd storyline but VERY well written. the lines seemed short but I liked the style a lot more than most. It was a decent read. I'm not into that gay's stuff but it's alright for what it is. I dunno, it's good. Simple words fused with a storyline. DEFFINATLY not what I expected ..way to keep the reader guessing. Keep it dope ..

!Nash, link in the sig ..(Bottom)

it's cah she is lesbian.. ^^^ well was...

but chea ma' u have ur own unique style of writing, & i liked tha emotion in this.. at points u could tell tha way u was expressin ur feelin's u was angry..
great wording in this 2.. what i liked about this piece was it's very orignal..
i mean.. readin tha title i didnt expect 2 be readin this.. but chea this was deep as hell.. pretty much like a poem.. fa' sure it was worth readin.. keep droppin em classic's ma'.....1

[EyeCandy]

oh & do leave feed in one of my o.ms in my sig they gettin slept on........1

[haji]

wat a lovely piece,i love every part of it,but it sounds more like a poem to me,or is it?

[EyeCandy]

wat a lovely piece,i love every part of it,but it sounds more like a poem to me,or is it?

lmfffao u didn't even read it.. because i wouldn't say this is lovely.. maybe deep, emotional.. but lovely.... meh... u post everywere like that don't cha.. u jus don't give up!

[ITawAPuddyKat]

Yes I'm a lesbian, this piece is about Reality being unchained.

In the first part is reality talking and its lonely, meaning my life is full of lies/fake.

The 2nd part is about my reality kicking in, daddy found out I was a lesbian, he force me to like guys with abusement.

The 3rd part is about reality being unleashed and loving it.

I hope that helps.

[EyeCandy]

Yes I'm a lesbian, this piece is about Reality being unchained.

In the first part is reality talking and its lonely, meaning my life is full of lies/fake.

The 2nd part is about my reality kicking in, daddy found out I was a lesbian, he force me to like guys with abusement.

The 3rd part is about reality being unleashed and loving it.

I hope that helps.

that was very tough & hard.. but fa real u wrote it down great in words..
tha way u explained it & everything.. tha subtitles did help.. lol
i write about my real life situations 2.. but its a different situation compared 2 urs..hope things stay up 4 u ma'...