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    Write to this Picture XXVIII

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    I fought for Pried.

    My troops i've lost,
    death lies the cost.
    Supplies are sparce,
    Regardless last thoughts.

    My family to I write,
    I'll fight till the night.
    Everything is gone,
    I fought for pride.


    Im not a poet, but I tried.
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    The True Enemy...

    The light shines bright as i see my enemy in sight
    I grip my gun tight fighting for my life, is what I do right?
    To late think bullets firing from my barrell making them extinct
    There facail features covered in red ink, no time to blink
    Bullets blast by my eyes sounds become greater in size
    I taste demise and feel him by my side I ain't ready to die
    feel cold corrupted tears roll down my eyes as i realize
    I'm fighting for my presidents lies this guy thats about to die
    Is in a similar situation, his life a simile of mine he just fights for the other side...
    So whos the true enemy, the gun or the man?
    The person who made the gun or the one who put ther guns in our hands?
    The one who shoots my friends or the one who gave him orders to fight till the end?
    Does my enemy stand on the oppisite side or does the enemy live in my own land?

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    the soldier stood upon the war ridden graveyard
    dumpin slugs harder than tha whip of a slave guard
    across tha back,slip crack as that drips stacks
    of emotion and anger,in danger bullets in tha chamber
    no reinforcments of course this,is poor shit
    get more hits,on tha floor twitch,from tha enemy
    envy all these memorys,embedded in my sensorys.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Godz Illusion
    The True Enemy...

    The light shines bright as i see my enemy in sight
    I grip my gun tight fighting for my life, is what I do right?
    To late think bullets firing from my barrell making them extinct
    There facail features covered in red ink, no time to blink
    Bullets blast by my eyes sounds become greater in size
    I taste demise and feel him by my side I ain't ready to die
    feel cold corrupted tears roll down my eyes as i realize
    I'm fighting for my presidents lies this guy thats about to die
    Is in a similar situation, his life a simile of mine he just fights for the other side...
    So whos the true enemy, the gun or the man?
    The person who made the gun or the one who put ther guns in our hands?
    The one who shoots my friends or the one who gave him orders to fight till the end?
    Does my enemy stand on the oppisite side or does the enemy live in my own land?

    that was deep... i was feelin that pimpin u got talent...
    Pimpin Comes Natural....
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    Quote Originally Posted by Da Don Juan
    that was deep... i was feelin that pimpin u got talent...
    Please don't free post in this forum.

    Soldier of fortune, i lay residual to pain and stife...
    Masked in animosity i place the blame in my life...
    Stood in a grave yard of lost souls, i claim the light...
    As my own, embrace the hate, as i disclaim the fight.

    Night falls upon the battle feild, seductive in its own...
    I place my burdens on the floor, make rest my only home...
    Sounds of gun fire rings true to to my ears, i'm alone...
    Yet comforted by death, anger becomes my clone.

    Fallen angel from the stars, twinkle in caress of dark...
    Striving for more, as i rise to a new level, making my mark.

    Soldier of fortune.
    AI


    “ˇViva la Revolución!”

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    aight then................

    they say im due for days, they says my lifes a waste,
    my troops dont wanna lose, while i just wanna prove,
    with this rifle in my hand, my stripes command,
    i lay enemys to waste for my land,
    they say im a murderer, they say im preculuar,
    i say their all horse shit, to judge me for fightin in their war,
    i miss my wife, i miss my lovely home,
    everyday a man falls , while the enemy calls,
    this to be a respectable death,well not by far,
    im facing my enemy and i let him get the best of me,
    im not a coward, im just a pawn you see,
    they dont care sitting in their wasington chairs,
    they dont see the blood and the tears,
    every man i see, i take from this earth,
    and a feeling of hate begins to be dispersed,
    i see my life as a waste at their dipsal,
    yet hold no lines to their mind of remorsefull
    i see my enemy, and empty my clip,
    and lay he upon this land of blood,
    now, its not for me,
    but for god to judge.......................

    .............thats how i do it...........................sincerly,

    spade..................
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    (HHFS)-Good ol' Days
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    /they say the army ain't a place for black folks/so the jakes put up shops on corners full of adrenaline so we can disease our minds and sell coke/thats why we see so many uncs on the street/full with cops and robbers this world is full with hell's heat/the devil's breath/a world where everything triggers sales by sex/I look at ya great lyricist above writing about the front lines/while I tell the story of the world I see through crud times/where youngsters load slugz with no names to their nines/I see young brothas runnin with the chases/this is reality son where I don't see the same faces/I'm startin to lose faith in God and have no belief in patience/wonder if there will be another kind of new creation/

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jonathon
    I fought for Pried.

    My troops i've lost,
    death lies the cost.
    Supplies are sparce,
    Regardless last thoughts.

    My family to I write,
    I'll fight till the night.
    Everything is gone,
    I fought for pride.


    Im not a poet, but I tried.

    shit was hard regardless...
    He knows all and sees all...the creator of our creativity ...I follow The Divinity

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    Valor

    Pure valor. enemies cower. I’ll devour my fear with revere
    strength within. envision the win. victory lain within
    roar is the aria. stars fall, its part of the.
    way I enject a 40 cal into the heart of a.
    faceless specter I see. but I cant see
    because before I know. I’ve downed my enemy
    weights around me. the wait is surmounting.
    the time it seems forever for the magazine…
    ….to stop shouting
    overturn bodies across the field. reveal.
    Halloween 24 hours my conception of all I hold dear.
    my men. platoon of ten. lost one. no fear
    cadence sighted and clear. perceision shots you can hear
    clouds abundant in the sight of He.
    watch over me. my men. and my country
    He knows all and sees all...the creator of our creativity ...I follow The Divinity

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    Quote Originally Posted by Godz Illusion
    The True Enemy...

    The light shines bright as i see my enemy in sight
    I grip my gun tight fighting for my life, is what I do right?
    To late think bullets firing from my barrell making them extinct
    There facail features covered in red ink, no time to blink
    Bullets blast by my eyes sounds become greater in size
    I taste demise and feel him by my side I ain't ready to die
    feel cold corrupted tears roll down my eyes as i realize
    I'm fighting for my presidents lies this guy thats about to die
    Is in a similar situation, his life a simile of mine he just fights for the other side...
    So whos the true enemy, the gun or the man?
    The person who made the gun or the one who put ther guns in our hands?
    The one who shoots my friends or the one who gave him orders to fight till the end?
    Does my enemy stand on the oppisite side or does the enemy live in my own land?
    truly an illusion in itself...well kaptivated...and kultivated

    yo
    He knows all and sees all...the creator of our creativity ...I follow The Divinity

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    i fight ..
    not for my mistakes, but that of another
    i fight ..
    not for family, but for a figmented brother
    that that does not exist ..
    someone who's life is based upon my myths
    a person with no cares, just morals of money
    i hope he drowns ..
    ..not that it'd be ironic or funny
    I shoot an innocent person ..
    why? because it was my order
    now why'd that mexi-nugget cross the fuckin border ..


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    He knows all and sees all...the creator of our creativity ...I follow The Divinity

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    Boris thinks the Promise of Honour is uplifting
    No Soldiers, no-Past, no Gas that Gags in the System
    No tears on the Cheek of the Crime, No Firing
    Its Dying-Time, asked to check the Accuracy of the 'Mines' Sign
    No chemicals that Burn on the skins of disgarded-names
    Dispite Red-Hot-Lead-Shots the Silence is Karma-on-Chains
    and the Violence is found in Needles and veins, Seems-Strange
    Terrain Vehicles and Planes, the world Needs-us to Change

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    No time, chaos, shots fired, I fire back
    Advance my position, kill, kill, bodies lay flat
    Many corpses, stench of death, gunsmoke
    Beautiful day, fire my gun, liberate
    No questions, always dutyful, loyal
    My Marines will win the day, and I with them
    Hail Mary, hope to live another day
    fire my gun, kill the enemies of Democracy
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