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  • NYNena161

    2 28.57%
  • Real Thorough

    5 71.43%
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Thread: Real vs NYNena161

  1. #1
     
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    Real vs NYNena161

    "MY FIRST TOPICAL"

    TOPIC
    Reincarnation

    Due: In an hour

    Unlimited lines



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    ok reincarnation it is b good luck real thorough b " My first Topical " too so im tryna take it easy but bring it son
    scytsophrenia

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    Aiight lil momma, do what you do.



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    my drop is ready pa ill drop now if u want? cuz im bored jus sittin here ya know lol nah lemme stop
    scytsophrenia

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    My b. go ahead and drop, I'm ready to drop also.....



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    Reincarnation defined a belief system that one's soul lives many life times in order to grow and learn.
    We could say that’s what happened to me but I lost my soul in return
    I remember the blood as it dripped down my thighs
    The pain was released and with relief I cried
    Not realizing what I was doing
    I took parts of myself and turned them to ruins
    My soul was so empty I had nowhere to turn
    When I lifted the blade my stomach would churn
    But the feeling was ignored
    I had to feel this void
    I cried all night and was left feeling destroyed
    There was no need to cry I had done this to myself
    I had no family I couldn’t turn to anyone else
    I looked up to God and called to the sky
    Begging him Lord please just let me die
    Release me from this pain that I feel inside
    Just then a voice came softly but loud
    It said you’re already released and I love you my child
    I fell to the ground thanking my father
    Returning to despair I would never bother
    I was so blind I guess I couldn’t see
    I was rehabilitated he reincarnated me
    scytsophrenia

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    there it is nothin special jus a first time thing ya know......... but do you pa go ahead and drop good luck
    scytsophrenia

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    A wealthy man flip-flopped to a mass of particles
    Usta rule world's...and now is just paired molecules
    In a critical condition, His life came up vanquished
    And his only remembrance is pictures n paintings
    When the wind hurls, His voice drifts soft spoken
    Molecules clash, & it resembles how his hearts broken
    His esophagus choken, A solid H2O has him frozen
    When he speaks...It goes to a liquid n' starts floating
    A free fall, Cuz the sun rays disperse his presence
    Creates him into a gas that gives off hideous essence
    His attendance is near, You can hear his moans
    How shameful he remains...Away from his throne
    Sat erectly upright on it...Plated with ruby red stones
    Greatness redeemed...If it happened he returned to home
    Never the less, Never the more, He's been replaced
    & now he only contains...Just a minute amount of space
    No controlling a race, His demise was well planned
    Someone upstairs didn't like him...put upon his hand...
    To his heart, And taken his body and soul away from him
    Only part of the king remains by particles...Cuz of Reincarnation



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    Aiight baby girl, nice drop, lets get these votes in.



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  10. #10
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    both was hott and well plot n structured. nena did a great job on hers n flow so my vote goes to her no hate
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    Aiight, good look for the feed.....lil momma up 1-0, lets get votes.



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    i liked both of them..they both had good structure and stay well on topic..

    i liked Reals more because i liked his imagery and all tha complex ways he put things..

    both did very well..good luck to both of yous

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    both was hott and well plot n structured. nena did a great job on hers n flow so my vote goes to her no hate

    im with annon
    nice drop nena

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    uppin for votes
    scytsophrenia

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    uppin for votes



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