An Ignorant Individual...

[Jay Walker]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=3961391#post3961391
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=272030


You’re a bitch chrit, and we’re all sick of your webbed lies
if you really had a job dog, you wouldn’t cheat for doe on websites
I mean, come on, look at his pockets... this poor guy is empty
Even his grand scheme comes off as more like a penny
And who would’ve guessed celes woulda been a fag and flaunt ya
But I’m not saying he’s ridin ya dick... he’s fuckin gaggin on ya
Anyone that isn’t a moron can see easily through the deceit
Whoever voted for you was probably offered a piece of the receipt
Cause what you speak is to weak to receive votes... know it dude
You cheat so much, Joey Greco could dedicate a whole show for you
Mac, Sylentz, SinAmen, I.Rose, Celes and Daedal
Shit Chrit, I’m surprised all of them can fit on that needle
Plus all ya other groupies, that are gutless pieces of fuckin shit
I’ll say it plain as day... without them, you’re nothing chrit
And they blatant as cancer patients... but fuck, I aint surprised
Ask born...
I sent him a PM Friday with everyone’s name and when they’d arrive
Believe you’d be empty without em, cause really ya makin us snore
Last time you came up with a hot bar you were makin some smores
Talkin high, like “I might have to try again, and annoy clouts”
How you gonna make fire..? ya couldn’t even do that in boy scouts
‘n besides your opponents, nobody stops for your bouts
The only person rehearsing ya verses is Oscar the Grouch
Cause you’re garbage...
got dissed and started talkin about an audio to slam kids?
On a positive note...
... you wont have to pay this time for any advancements (Sorry Scott)
But let’s be real... when you grip the mic hopin to make herbs shiver
You won’t drop anything worthy like the day you were delivered
And shit you’re sucha slime, whether you’re doin whatever
Last time he turned a nickel to a dime, he fuckin glued ‘em together
You’ll never actually be triumphant ... really I mean it
buyin ya panties is the only time you’ll be Victoria’s... Secret
All his life he’s respected his mother, even though she’s slutty cuz
n looked up to his forefathers cause they never figured which really was
‘n you’re illy... what? C’mon people, for real he sucks
goin duck huntin is the fuckin only time he’ll see a million bucks
this guys a ho livin in Idaho, and he claims he got game yo
but he’s only seen chips cause he’s livin in the state of potatoes
‘n you don’t exist with a bitch, cause with you, they hate even talkin
Only thing you’ve taken out is ya trash, and that aint even often
Okay... I’ll stop it... I know you’re getting with hoes
Otherwise... how in the fuck else would you get any votes
You’re a cheater, so we can see you’re the feeblest foe
For christ sake... even you’re names asking people for votes
But if I dot God, its gonna be with shots cuz
That’ll rupture your spleen quicker than your shot does
Talking shit like you’re a pro fighter cuz you fight amazing
You’re always on the internet chrit...
... when in the fuck do you have time for training?
You really think you’re tough... come and try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
I’ll beat ya queer, kill ya quicker than ya can inhale
Then do it again after I die when I meet ya there^ for the thrill
You’re dick riders don’t count, cause those dudes is foolish
But nobody misses ya clause like erybody but you is jewish
When you gonna be threw with music? You might be big, but son
You’re the only heavyweight here that can’t hit like one
3-360’s, studio equipment, plus a condo to uncoil at?
wow man, you’ve gotta be one of the biggest spoiled fags
and stop actin like you smoke cause dog we know not so
You’re only L G is that plasma TV ya mom got for the condo
But I aint upset about this shit, for real, it’s nothing dude
The pathetic thing is... you cheated... and you’ll STILL fucking lose

you fuckin goon...

[Nostradomus.]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=3961391#post3961391
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=272030


You’re a bitch chrit, and we’re all sick of your webbed lies
if you really had a job dog, you wouldn’t cheat for doe on websites
lol, true.
I mean, come on, look at his pockets... this poor guy is empty
Even his grand scheme comes off as more like a penny
meh. could be better.
And who would’ve guessed celes woulda been a fag and flaunt ya
But I’m not saying he’s ridin ya dick... he’s fuckin gaggin on ya
lmfao. good.
Anyone that isn’t a moron can see easily through the deceit
Whoever voted for you was probably offered a piece of the receipt
so true, very nice.
Cause what you speak is to weak to receive votes... know it dude
You cheat so much, Joey Greco could dedicate a whole show for you
HAHAHA....!!
Mac, Sylentz, SinAmen, I.Rose, Celes and Daedal
Shit Chrit, I’m surprised all of them can fit on that needle
...ok.
Plus all ya other groupies, that are gutless pieces of fuckin shit
I’ll say it plain as day... without them, you’re nothing chrit
true, nice job.
And they blatant as cancer patients... but fuck, I aint surprised
Ask born...
I sent him a PM Friday with everyone’s name and when they’d arrive
haha, wow.
Believe you’d be empty without em, cause really ya makin us snore
Last time you came up with a hot bar you were makin some smores
LMMFAO, nice concept brah.
Talkin high, like “I might have to try again, and annoy clouts”
How you gonna make fire..? ya couldn’t even do that in boy scouts
omg, so wittyful..‘n besides your opponents, nobody stops for your bouts
The only person rehearsing ya verses is Oscar the Grouch
ha, nice concept also.
Cause you’re garbage...
got dissed and started talkin about an audio to slam kids?
On a positive note...
... you wont have to pay this time for any advancements (Sorry Scott)
dope.
But let’s be real... when you grip the mic hopin to make herbs shiver
You won’t drop anything worthy like the day you were delivered
oh shit, harsh.
And shit you’re sucha slime, whether you’re doin whatever
Last time he turned a nickel to a dime, he fuckin glued ‘em together
nice.
You’ll never actually be triumphant ... really I mean it
buyin ya panties is the only time you’ll be Victoria’s... Secret
lol, alright.
All his life he’s respected his mother, even though she’s slutty cuz
n looked up to his forefathers cause they never figured which really was
dope, harsh.‘n you’re illy... what? C’mon people, for real he sucks
goin duck huntin is the fuckin only time he’ll see a million bucks
hahaha, concepts are dope man.

and all the rest is too dope to explain.

this guys a ho livin in Idaho, and he claims he got game yo
but he’s only seen chips cause he’s livin in the state of potatoes
‘n you don’t exist with a bitch, cause with you, they hate even talkin
Only thing you’ve taken out is ya trash, and that aint even often
Okay... I’ll stop it... I know you’re getting with hoes
Otherwise... how in the fuck else would you get any votes
You’re a cheater, so we can see you’re the feeblest foe
For christ sake... even you’re names asking people for votes
But if I dot God, its gonna be with shots cuz
That’ll rupture your spleen quicker than your shot does
Talking shit like you’re a pro fighter cuz you fight amazing
You’re always on the internet chrit...
... when in the fuck do you have time for training?
You really think you’re tough... come and try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
I’ll beat ya queer, kill ya quicker than ya can inhale
Then do it again after I die when I meet ya there^ for the thrill
You’re dick riders don’t count, cause those dudes is foolish
But nobody misses ya clause like erybody but you is jewish
When you gonna be threw with music? You might be big, but son
You’re the only heavyweight here that can’t hit like one
3-360’s, studio equipment, plus a condo to uncoil at?
wow man, you’ve gotta be one of the biggest spoiled fags
and stop actin like you smoke cause dog we know not so
You’re only L G is that plasma TV ya mom got for the condo
But I aint upset about this shit, for real, it’s nothing dude
The pathetic thing is... you cheated... and you’ll STILL fucking lose

you fuckin goon...

Dude, this shit is so fucking crazy, and so fucking true. I mean, the only disses I've seen around OM for a while were Lay vs $pit, Lay vs $pit, and you get the idea. Well, at first i thought this was gonna be a regular OM, like a topical. Well, once i saw the first couple words, i knew you were dissing someone of some sort. You pulled it off, and you pulled it off well. Your lines were full of crazy concepts, some were so dope i couldnt even think of them. You have so much potential, but fuck that. You are potential. You're one of the people that aspiring textcees look up to. You're the guy to get bitten off of millions of times. And if you havent gotten bitten yet, people better start because this is what'll get them in legends. Great diss man, i'll get this in OM HoF, possibly even Legends. Sick man, sick.

[Derive]

and stop actin like you smoke cause dog we know not so
You’re only L G is that plasma TV ya mom got for the condo


^^Rofl



This had some nice punches and some alright punches but overall a good verse.

Funny how so many people be clowning on this fag. He deserves it. Fuck'a Chrit. He doesn't even deserve to be in the finals.

[EOS_GangGreenEnt]

yo dawg tight fuckin rhymes and gr8t flow, u stuck to theme too...peep this:
http://www.ganggreenentertainment.com

and get at me on aim or myspace
http://www.myspace.com/chopxprss

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[tonecrusher]

I'm rather new on the forum, but who the fuck is that Chrit o_0

I guess he ain't nice XD

[Jay Walker]

thx.

[Automatic.]

lmao, this was dope. U killed him man, so many fuckin lines and it never got boring, the punches kept coming and coming. I saw a few meh lines but overall it was nice shit. Alot of it was quotable. I liked the way u started it off..

You’re a bitch chrit, and we’re all sick of your webbed lies
if you really had a job dog, you wouldn’t cheat for doe on websites

...then the u kept swinging and swinging. Nice shit, keep it up.


btw, this was the 3rd dope diss on poor chrit, other two being Spit and Cam lol. Poor guy.

[Cody Nash]

Lmao those were hot..Way more enjoyable than pittiful FL shit. Deffinatly beyond other peoples skill levels. Very witty and creative writing here. Good job Jay..lol,


Believe you’d be empty without em, cause really ya makin us snore
Last time you came up with a hot bar you were makin some smores
DOPE^^Lmao..

[Born To Kill]

Cause what you speak is to weak to receive votes... know it dude
You cheat so much, Joey Greco could dedicate a whole show for you
Talkin high, like “I might have to try again, and annoy clouts”
How you gonna make fire..? ya couldn’t even do that in boy scouts
But let’s be real... when you grip the mic hopin to make herbs shiver
You won’t drop anything worthy like the day you were delivered
All his life he’s respected his mother, even though she’s slutty cuz
n looked up to his forefathers cause they never figured which really was
‘n you don’t exist with a bitch, cause with you, they hate even talkin
Only thing you’ve taken out is ya trash, and that aint even often
Talking shit like you’re a pro fighter cuz you fight amazing
You’re always on the internet chrit...
... when in the fuck do you have time for training?
You really think you’re tough... come and try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
I’ll beat ya queer, kill ya quicker than ya can inhale
Then do it again after I die when I meet ya there^ for the thrill
You’re dick riders don’t count, cause those dudes is foolish
But nobody misses ya clause like erybody but you is jewish
When you gonna be threw with music? You might be big, but son
You’re the only heavyweight here that can’t hit like one
3-360’s, studio equipment, plus a condo to uncoil at?
wow man, you’ve gotta be one of the biggest spoiled fags

Most of that was fuckin hilarious...

Nice attack.

I guess I'd best go over and sort out 1-2, eh?

[Jay Walker]

^lol. take your time born. and thanks for the replies guys.

[<Supreme>]

nice drop,,,long tho
flow - gd throughout
structure - was mainly consistent, but about 5/6 lines were a bit out
rhymin - simple in sum places, and slightly developed in other places - the rhymin in this piece was really gd,,,but try to develop it a bit more

i liked this piece, only thing i can say is try to make ur rhymin a bit more complex, but apart from tht and the structure - gd drop, keep @ it

[Jay Walker]

lol. you dont realize how many times that feed contridicts itself... do you.

[Spekz]

Well other than the fact that it was rlly something i would expect in the OM area it was definetly dope, and to be honest i read most of it but not all of it cuz well it was like a huge text battle lol..... shit i read made me wanna crawl in a whole and die cuz i was either laughin so hard, or feeling a small pity for chrit lol .......i appreciate this piece because unlike topical text is something i have a hard time staying consistent with on one battle....thats y i only do text once in awhile.....so for you to come and drop DISS AFTER DISS for as many lines you did made my jaw hit the floor....so i respect that....


FAVORITE LINES THAT I CAME ACROSS:

Mac, Sylentz, SinAmen, I.Rose, Celes and Daedal
Shit Chrit, I’m surprised all of them can fit on that needle
Plus all ya other groupies, that are gutless pieces of fuckin shit
I’ll say it plain as day... without them, you’re nothing chrit
And they blatant as cancer patients... but fuck, I aint surprised
Ask born...
I sent him a PM Friday with everyone’s name and when they’d arrive

AND

and stop actin like you smoke cause dog we know not so
You’re only L G is that plasma TV ya mom got for the condo
But I aint upset about this shit, for real, it’s nothing dude
The pathetic thing is... you cheated... and you’ll STILL fucking lose


HONESTLY COULD QUOTE 3/4'S...BUT THOSE JUSS SOME I LIKED READING!


**IF YOU GET THE TIME..PLZ HIT UP MY OM....LINK IN SIG**!!!

[J.Christ]

man, who the fuck is Chrit?

[Jay Walker]

wow spekz. thanks for all that feed man. i swear i'll get at your piece toomorrow, im just stoned and feel like chillin, but i do appreciate it man. and if you ever need words of advice on getting in the dissing mind set, i'll help you out. its truely simple.