YungVik vs. YoungLadie (REMATCH!)

[justrude]

YungVik vs. YoungLadie

Ok Young, I'm setting this by your rules.
30+ lines
House rules
no d/r, crew, hate votes
10 to check
Due anytime by Friday
Topics:
Bad Girl
A Kid's Worst Nightmare
Lifeless Person
Fatherless Daughter
Soul Searching
In The Ghetto
500+ to vote
Let's Go

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Check. Good luck Symone.

[YoungLadie]

Ok check.

[YoungLadie]

vik...since u said cho ppl in da hospital da new extension date
is monday at 4pm that shuld be enuf

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Change of plans Symone, I'll be dropping my verse today.

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Going Undercover: Posing As A Bad Girl

This Isn't An Easy Job...
...But Nothing Else Is

A Split Second Changed My Life...


It's been three days, but I've turned into a hardened criminal
My life looks bleak and empty, and all seems disimal
What happened as an argument, turned into a lawsuit
They booked and fingerprinted me, and was quick to boot
Yes, I was mad, but what I said wasn't intentional
But her part in this wasn't even mentionable
In under a week, I went from a child to an inmate
Because of my stupidity, I fell and took the bait
Is this a dream, because I haven't gone anywhere
If so, please wake me up from this horrible nightmare!

Reflecting On It...

I've been looking at these gray walls, and I'm driving insane
I've done nothing but think, and you haven't felt my pain
I sit and stare into nowhere, no one to calm my fear
And then I wonder, why the hell am I here?
She got a year, but I recived a whopping three
And I asked, and they said "That's how it has to be"
I'm mistaken as a "Bad Girl", but that isn't my lifestyle
I'll never gain my persona back, though I'm in denial
I think, would I change anything if I could go back?
No, I don't regret a thing: Which is the one trait I lack

Coming To Grips...

As the days tick away, this room has rotted my mind
And the life is gone, squeezed out in a tight bind
I was thrown into a hole, forever in darkness
I said I could prevail, but could you embark this?
Eaten by maggots, roaches crawling on my body
It's been 4 years, but that memory will still haunt me
But it's over now, and I can put away my past
But not entirely, because these thoughts will still last
Looking back, I'm upset about it, because I ruined a "pearl"
But I'm not aplogizing for anything, because that's life as a "Bad Girl"

...I always wanted to know what it was like, because I was curious
But now that I've been there, I never want to feel that experence...

-Vikkie

[YoungLadie]

Nice Vik nice...I liked this one

Fatherless Daughter
Every night I wonder what it feels like being held by a man
Night after night hearin my friends shout love ya dad...
.....and why?.......................I could never understand
My mom always told me that was something I could never do
And with that being said I was constantly confused
I felt as if my heart was bein misused
Having a father whose daughter he never knew
I heard of everlasting pain but I never thought it was true

It was Hard for me growing up in the Streets
Everyday I watched Girls get beat
Beat by the one they called Father
But to me...What I saw didn't bother
Bother what I dreamed...Or what I wanted
But I could never have it so I was constantly haunted

I remember those days I cried myself to sleep
After Rereading the letter from my Father stating why he hated me

What I'm about to say dont take personally
It's not you..... it's more like it's me
I don't want you for a child, we could never be
I hate everything about you can't you see?
Why don't you just drop dead and end our misery?
Just kill yourselff...I mean seriously
I don't want a daughter
You don't have a father
Your a fatherless daughter...a loner...a bastard
But if you die now you can live to be with your master

Those very words killed me inside
No longer this dreaded pain I could hide
Not one person could I find...to run and confide
So to myself I continuesly lied
"He loves you and he is coming back
Don't worry about it, your his girl and thats a fact"

People look at me as a damsel in distress
No...That's not the case...I just need this man to carress
Carress and hold me tight and let me know I'm his little girl
Telling me I'm the only thing that matters in this forbidden world
I guess my prayers God misinterpreted
I asked

To have a father

< See I even quoted it

Now I'm being drafted into this horrible place called life
I thought it was over because I thought I paid the price
By my father I was cruelly crucified
I'm just another guilt stricken fatherless daughter
Whose heart was manipulated and then slaughtered
So I'll be the one to end the misery
And yet I'll do it ever so easily

So No longer will my heart render any more pain...
Because I'm done playing this Fatherless game

[YoungLadie]

sorry...some of the lines got streched and didnt come out how i wanted...
I asked "To have a father" < See I even quoted it

Edit** that wasnt supposed to be quoted like that...just quote martations...
So please overlook that one...

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uppin.

[YoungLadie]

Uppin 1

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

this was good

.....i'll prolly vote lata on, i dont feel like puttin all that shit down to even consider votin...

.......still not sure on who one yet

[YoungLadie]

uppin 2

[Mr. Write]

LOL youre supposed to at least write about the same TOPIC! AHAHA. How the fuck do you expect people to actually vote on this? Yungvik will win because her name is slightly less played out than YoungLadie lol.

[YoungLadie]

Um nobuddy...She wanted to do different topics...Thats wat we agreed on...so um yea and wtf does name have to do with anything...ok anyways

[YoungLadie]

uppin 3