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    Papers Ace

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=268907
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=268423

    my mic's shootin the lead thats flying, my moves is death defying, they need dental records to idetify him

    Las Vegas be a rough route, papers pages get u snuffed out,
    one flick of da wrist n u see death no such thing as a tough bout,
    put ya in my pipe n -smoke you- n get puffed out

    you know i come to work dem dudes, if they get outta line i hurt them fools
    slain more guyz then murder poolz, my team be known as da perfect crew,
    so aint no tellin what our word'z will do
    (E.A)

    on da mic don't tell me how i act n sound, or i'll be quick ta get the mak n pound
    mc's start shit, my pen leave em retarded bastard clowns with a departed plastered frown

    i'll get ya in ya cap n gown, with a gap tooth smile,cuz we smack da pilez of the wack n foul
    one tap n they subtract like i harrased a child leave em in a blacksuit pal
    if ya got skillz grab the strap n my cats attack ya stylez

    and im a basket case, punchez bash ya face, thrown away cuz i trash the waste
    cuz mc'z get they wackness traced, blood puddles cuz they tactic's fake,
    and can't accept they fate, so sum backs we laced cuz cats we chased
    we blast they traits, they be slammin breaks when they saw the bats N blades

    RB i like how it turned out, my mic packs a fire escape get u burnt out
    cuz all u mc's get ya dirt south, so if ya wanna churp mouthz,
    Imma squeeze da glock, u shot wit da burner on ya learned routes

    just know me n my family be gunnin n poppin crews,
    our spit'z be wett'n mc's up like the topz a roofz,
    ya style'z predictable so we block ya moves,
    my team so sly we sell a cop a duece,
    and we constantly shineing and its not because we be rock'n jewels
    but cuz the damage from my punchez be rott'n you,
    leave ya socked n brusied, with more pain then wat a glock would do,
    so ya'll best stop the feud, before my scythe leave ya chopped in two
    Last edited by Devils_Diamond; February 4th, 2006 at 07:11 PM

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    aiite on a real dow tha structure is fucked!
    & i dont like tha colour.. its difficult 2 read it...
    sort it out & i mite come back 2 read all of it..1
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    yo this was aight. it flowed well an you used your words the right way. the color did fuck it up a lil but i kept readin it so it's pretty good. peace out an hit me up wit the collab man

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    ayo i switched it up now can i get sum fuckin feed

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    sorry bout that aiite.. lol fa real it was hard 2 read.. colours was 2 bright...

    Las Vegas be a rough route, papers pages get u snuffed out,
    one flick of da wrist n u see death no such thing as a tough bout,
    put ya in my pipe n -smoke you- n get puffed out

    ^^^ my fave lines.. but u cudda improved on tha last line.. i liked it still

    cant qwote all but yeah.. overall it was a good piece... flow stayed pretty good throughout tha whole of verse/song.. i'm kinda confuzed cah of tha structure.. but yeah i liked your wording 2... u had some decent mulities in there 2...
    next time shorten ur lines, be more creative & complexed.. fo sho' dis was a good piece dow... i can deffo see u improvin & i'd love 2 read more from ya....

    if ya dont mind check out my o.m in my sig i'd appriciate it.. ..1
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    ayo much luv ta ya'll repp'n yall now, feedback hard ta come by these dayz, i miss the ol dayz, anyway uppin this

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