Multi Fantastic (please feed)

[Devils_Diamond]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=268423 -- Paragon
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...6&page=2&pp=15 -- Ez. Eddie
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=268907 -- Pro

kill em fast, aint nothing to fool with
im too swift ya soft like cool whip
bustin two clips ta make ya mom sayin "whos this"
leave ya with more then a bruised lip
so you best move dip before i attack wit
these soulja type tactics and get ya back whipped
I'm fast ta crack whips its a fact when my gat hits
ya head u'll do backflips all red in da casket
unlimited dank for phines funds limitless in the bank wit cream
and these pranksta teens know my keys schank em clean
puttin they bitch asses in a gangsta lean
unknown in the school halls cuz i was dumb slow
but i'd still run through ya'll till i learned guns blow
they'll make you fall and crews smalll hittin with the force of a Uhaul
persuasive like therapy thanks for takeing care of me
turns out there worst fear would be
a boy thats cursed with no cure for his disease
always smokin hella trees while commitin felony's
conflictions make the fellas bleed
specially when hella high on inphedamines
got me in the sky see'n better things
fillin prophecys like shells N... taco meat
prophets be telling me i'll own the game like property
foes not stoppin me my concoctions puts holes in oddysey's
odd ta see aint no one else's technique toppin me
possibly im on the top and be unlockin feats.
'll bury you in a grave wit your computer
N leave ya spirtiual in pain spaded and nootered
you coun't phade it kid, if ya was a lazer shooter
im white N stickin like cum on there peweter
try N bite kid, leave ya hung by an intruder

Lookin for sum feed on this

[LostKlawz]

Decent drop, lacking much vocab which coulld give it that extra boost up there. A lot of repition showing same lines worded in different ways....Just let your mind flow into words dont think about it just basically write with your thoughts and you should be able to flow smoothly...definitly willing to read more as you progress, keep it up kid.
LK

[Devils_Diamond]

word, much luv, propz for da feed yo uppin this

[big j da fat boy]

this was aight. not a lot of vocab actually you need more vocab in this drop an it would've been better. i liked how it flowed an it had some pretty decent punches in it. just keep doin ya thang man an you'll get there eventually. peace out

[Spoken]

DD nice drop and shit but i am here for another purpose..........


go check into the damn crew eternal scriptures HO!


you say im down when i made legendary mafia then you never checked in now its eternal scriptures fool