.Self. Vs. SirusX

[.Self.]

you know the rules b.

12 lines.
no crew votes, dick rides, etc.
blind spit.
25 mins after check.
5 mins to check

[.Self.]

ok check.

[SirusX]

check in

[.Self.]

check it out, sirus's spits they come real sick intense,
started out dope, but then he lost his common sense,
hope this will be the only time Ill serve you without a menu,
my style can cut you so bad, youll be callin me mr.ginsu,
Ill take you for breakfast, as I make your fuckin neck-twist,
respect this, before my style spits out your necklace,
this aint a battle man, shit this is a wack practice,
who the fuck died, and left you head of rap wackness,
so please bitch, pack your bags and then stayoffs,
cause when I spit, youll choke like hassleback in the playoffs,
let me take the time to spit my last line perfectly,
didnt mean to fuck you up, I did it inedvertantly.

[SirusX]

self's been a disgrace from the start, this kids got no heart
u aint hard..i'll knock ur lights out, so u can read in the dark
this kids a faggot, your getting broke with red vines
cuz u can put thought in ur words but still never drop head lines
i'll leave your mind fatigued with little effort involved
cause yah skill still needs to rise up, like midgets pissin in stalls
kids too gullible, this dumb fucks far from being legit
cause even time someone kicks his ass, it bruises his dick
yous a lame-bitch, some clown that we all know's soft
i use periods to end sentences, you use em to show off
Beatin me?..thats doubtful..like Klux Klan dating black chicks
just read some of Selfs verse to really know what wack is

[.Self.]

nice drop b. good luck.

[shaneanaitor]

yo sirus x man u gotta stop backin down to battles talkin u wanna battle me than u dont show ppl dont battle this trick.. your rhymes are weak too g .... keap it real

[status_unknown]

vote - sirusx

Came way harder, and almost every punch connected. I enjoyed reading this verse. Funny. Self, u held the structure and flow down, but ur punches were lacking dude. No hate though. Straight battle.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=268621

Honest vote^^^

*i'll poll when u leave an honest vote*

pz

[Katch-22]

check it out, sirus's spits they come real sick intense,
started out dope, but then he lost his common sense

let me take the time to spit my last line perfectly,
didnt mean to fuck you up, I did it inedvertantly.

vs

self's been a disgrace from the start, this kids got no heart
u aint hard..i'll knock ur lights out, so u can read in the dark

yous a lame-bitch, some clown that we all know's soft
i use periods to end sentences, you use em to show off
Beatin me?..thats doubtful..like Klux Klan dating black chicks
just read some of Selfs verse to really know what wack is

punches - sirus
personalz - sirus
flow - tie
structure - tie
creativity - sirus

the better personalz decided it for me

v - sirus

[SirusX]

2-0.

up

[SirusX]

and up.

[SirusX]

1 more time.

[thewatcher]

dam sirus another hot verse im blown i dont got 100 posts ud hav my vote

[thewatcher]

alright i got my 100 posts my vote is sirus better flow punches and wordplay V-sirus

[Silas]

self's been a disgrace from the start, this kids got no heart
u aint hard..i'll knock ur lights out, so u can read in the dark
this kids a faggot, your getting broke with red vines
cuz u can put thought in ur words but still never drop head lines
i'll leave your mind fatigued with little effort involved
cause yah skill still needs to rise up, like midgets pissin in stalls
kids too gullible, this dumb fucks far from being legit
cause even time someone kicks his ass, it bruises his dick
yous a lame-bitch, some clown that we all know's soft
i use periods to end sentences, you use em to show off
Beatin me?..thats doubtful..like Klux Klan dating black chicks
just read some of Selfs verse to really know what wack is

vs

nothing

Sirus was nice with this. He took the win right away with his first 2 lines. Good job to both. But sirus took this, .Self. you did pretty good but you'r lines was wack i might say. Elevate.

V/ - SirusX