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Memorial day’s gone,..... but i'll teach the trend to you
It only comes once a year.. & so does a win for you
i'm Hannibals-Kin... punches Damage-Ya-Chin...
ur a Fraud, only time ur "Fur-Real", is when u wearin "Animal-Skin"
low-rate is ya bars appearance...i endeavor laughter,
you hold'n "Weight" but to me ya wins like "Space"...they never "Matter"..!!
Pussy, U lose cuz ya can’t concentrate.. Ya gotta release ya whit
But don’t be mad you lost ya focus.. That car was a piece of shit
This geek’ll be who’s losin’, we hate U.. That’s no delusion
So if suicide’s the last shit on ya mind.. Then Jump to conclusion!
Oouch....G'L
Originally Posted by Surrenity
..?..
Uh Oh we got another fag back to rapin...bout to get a beatng,
but of course we're glad to see your back...whenever your leaving,
This battle is just unfair im waay doper...its lyrical abuse,
and as u can see in that quote^^......
i get paid to make an ass of myself, whats your excuse?
I always been told to try hard, but i wont, but u still through,
i'd aim my punches for the moon.....but i'd have no chance @ hittin u,
you fake like your dope but still no one answers when u say who?
all of rb knows when you battle yourself is the only time u get a double u, (w)
im almost done this verse and i merked you pretty fast,
yea your verses are the shit...and their being dropped by an ass,
oops i meant to put my name for that quote not ill's
Why You Gotta Make Up Fake Quotes For Personal's?
Nice Drop N e Way..
Memorial day’s gone,..... but i'll teach the trend to you
It only comes once a year.. & so does a win for you
^^lacks wit
i'm Hannibals-Kin... punches Damage-Ya-Chin...
ur a Fraud, only time ur "Fur-Real", is when u wearin "Animal-Skin"
^^okish but kinda forced and needed better wording
low-rate is ya bars appearance...i endeavor laughter,
you hold'n "Weight" but to me ya wins like "Space"...they never "Matter"..!!
^^sayin his wins dont matter to you aint exactly a diss. Plus this needed better wording
Pussy, U lose cuz ya can’t concentrate.. Ya gotta release ya whit
But don’t be mad you lost ya focus.. That car was a piece of shit
^^haha ok this was well-worded cos it surprised me. That's what you need to do more. Only thing I'd say is word it a bit harsher
This geek’ll be who’s losin’, we hate U.. That’s no delusion
So if suicide’s the last shit on ya mind.. Then Jump to conclusion!
^^nah didnt work cos you didnt set it up right or word it right, nice idea though
vs.
Uh Oh we got another fag back to rapin...bout to get a beatng,
but of course we're glad to see your back...whenever your leaving,
^^rapin = forced sex, you mean rappinthis is nicely worded but kinda played
Quote:
Originally Posted by I!! Temper
I'm a local Amatuer Comedian
This battle is just unfair im waay doper...its lyrical abuse,
and as u can see in that quote^^......
i get paid to make an ass of myself, whats your excuse?
^^not too bad but a bit played
I always been told to try hard, but i wont, but u still through,
i'd aim my punches for the moon.....but i'd have no chance @ hittin u,
^^nah, so what if he aint the moon, this needed better wording
you fake like your dope but still no one answers when u say who?
all of rb knows when you battle yourself is the only time u get a double u, (w)
^^mad played
im almost done this verse and i merked you pretty fast,
yea your verses are the shit...and their being dropped by an ass,
^^ok flip but this is played too
you both need to come with more surprising and less-ordinary, easy to think of concepts
hmm close but I'ma have to go with Ill temper for less played shit
v/Ill temper
Pussy, U lose cuz ya can’t concentrate.. Ya gotta release ya whit
But don’t be mad you lost ya focus.. That car was a piece of shit
vs
Uh Oh we got another fag back to rapin...bout to get a beatng,
but of course we're glad to see your back...whenever your leaving,
meh battle both of you came played and weak but im a go wit surr on this 1 and ive seen you come wayyyy stronger then this homie i guess you were slacking but heh w/e
v/surr
Biter, Banned
Memorial day’s gone,..... but i'll teach the trend to you
It only comes once a year.. & so does a win for you
Wack
i'm Hannibals-Kin... punches Damage-Ya-Chin...
ur a Fraud, only time ur "Fur-Real", is when u wearin "Animal-Skin"
VERY played
low-rate is ya bars appearance...i endeavor laughter,
you hold'n "Weight" but to me ya wins like "Space"...they never "Matter"..!!
Mehh almost. Poor wordin though
Pussy, U lose cuz ya can’t concentrate.. Ya gotta release ya whit
But don’t be mad you lost ya focus.. That car was a piece of shit
*chuckles* pretty good.
This geek’ll be who’s losin’, we hate U.. That’s no delusion
So if suicide’s the last shit on ya mind.. Then Jump to conclusion
Pretty good
Overall - 4/10
vs
Uh Oh we got another fag back to rapin...bout to get a beatng,
but of course we're glad to see your back...whenever your leaving,
Nice
This battle is just unfair im waay doper...its lyrical abuse,
and as u can see in that quote^^......
i get paid to make an ass of myself, whats your excuse?
Mehh
I always been told to try hard, but i wont, but u still through,
i'd aim my punches for the moon.....but i'd have no chance @ hittin u,
No
you fake like your dope but still no one answers when u say who?
all of rb knows when you battle yourself is the only time u get a double u, (w)
Played
im almost done this verse and i merked you pretty fast,
yea your verses are the shit...and their being dropped by an ass,
Mehh aight.
Overall - 5/10
v. Surrenity by a hair
...Keep It Trill...
Fucc what a nigga gotta say
Fucc what a cracca gotta say
Fucc what a bitch gotta say
Fucc what a tricc gotta say
Fucc what a pimp gotta say
Fucc what a player, AND a hater gotta say.
man this was an overall okay battle but mman surrenity you need to come with better word play and punches but muh mans surrinity took this one with better punches and personals.......
v/surrinity
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Pussy, U lose cuz ya can’t concentrate.. Ya gotta release ya whit
But don’t be mad you lost ya focus.. That car was a piece of shit
vs
Uh Oh we got another fag back to rapin...bout to get a beatng,
but of course we're glad to see your back...whenever your leaving,
v/surrentiy (better verse)
Both came a lil weak IMO....temper work on your structure it was off....Both work on your punches ive seen better from surrenity before but he took this with a better quote and a harder punch in the battle^....anyway's no hate.
~1~
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would vote but i dont have 500 posts.
Pussy, U lose cuz ya can’t concentrate.. Ya gotta release ya whit
But don’t be mad you lost ya focus.. That car was a piece of shit
vs
Uh Oh we got another fag back to rapin...bout to get a beatng,
but of course we're glad to see your back...whenever your leaving,
This battle is just unfair im waay doper...its lyrical abuse,
and as u can see in that quote^^......
i get paid to make an ass of myself, whats your excuse?
S came a little bit harder, there was some iight quotes but both need to elevate some more
V/S
TNL
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