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    Drowning In Stress.

    Drowning In Stress.

    All these evil thoughts in my mind I'm living a sin.
    sharks in the ocean cement on my legs I'm unable 2 swim.
    locked up for a year thinking wft am I living threw.
    stood as a group now I'm fighting as a individual.
    someone to hold me up is exactly wat I'm needing.
    N' this dehidrating for love got my heart bleeding.
    worry bout me and turn my friends aside I had too.
    now I'm breaking apart my body parts are fragile.
    pain sharpening my chest like I hugged a knife.
    mom is nowhere close and I'm loseing the luv of my life.
    I look up to the sky. with blood stains in my eye.
    the truth is hidden in my death my lifes a lie.
    back is stinging chest is hurting and my heart burns.
    ocean is drownin me dont know how 2 swim I need 2 learn.
    no life within me in my soul theres dead spots.
    brain can't function death is giving me head shots.
    small amount of trust and my love for people is less.
    slowly fall underneath the ocean waves hit against my chest.
    confused so unsure words is how I'm sounding.
    no happiness around me In stress is where I'm drowning.
    If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.

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    uppin.
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    Wordplay needed a lil elevation.
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    uppin.
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    uppin 4 feed
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    aiight i was really feelin tht shit pretty sic
    keep it up aiight 1

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    thanks. more feed
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