Topic: Shot In The Dark
Lines : Min:12 Max:24
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Yung_Wun
Mentalz
Yung_Wun VS. Mentalz [Topicle]
Topic: Shot In The Dark
Lines : Min:12 Max:24
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iight here i go...
chek it yo...
SHOT IN THE DARK
nigga im'a leave u shot in the dark/
all u gon see iz a spark in the middle of the empty park/
then im gon dump yo body in the ocean to get merked by a shark/
yea sumthin like jawz/
and i heard u b havin to beg yo bitch to take off her draws/
see i dont have to do that ima pimp/
by the end of the battle u gon b walkin wit a limp/
u see nigga im demented/
the shyt u spitin sound like half yo brain dented/
im jus sayin the shyt u spit sucks/
u gon b like poppa dock from 8 mile u gon get choked up/
u see im doin diz shyt fo a spot on a crew/
and im'a bust on u like THE GAME did DJ CLUE/
u see i rip it on the mic/
afta diz battle u should jus turn into a bitch ass dike/
o back to the shot in the dark/
nigga u like a chiwawa all u do iz bark/
u see im battlin u in my white tee/
and afta diz battle all u gon be able to do iz despite me/
A HOLLA BacK wit yo shyt
yo hurry up and spite that
Shot In The Dark
Some days the sun rays shine down on his presence
And the light from night always comes with a lesson
But it's time for confession, & he isn’t ready to face it
So he remains complacent on steps outside of his basement
Tries to erase him as he revises his statements
Comprises his cards right on up threw his Ace's
To his graced talents to valiant passions for violence
Though misguided he'd assured his conscience enlightened
So he stands, walks down the steps towards the corner
Where former ideals use to conform for the boredom
Now it's all broken as he strolls up towards poor slum
He's aimed for forgiveness, as it rains for his kin’s sins
Soaked to the bone as he remains to repent them
Rounding the walk way as his soul cries for tomorrow
Although he hates all sorrow he knows his times borrowed
Poison to swallow as the lump in his throat becomes hallow
He's poised to embark and keep traveling despite the remarks
Though he knows it's for not .. but it's a shot in the dark.
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if i could vote i'd go with mentalz on this one cuz he had better structure...im not exactly sure what a topical battle is but im pretty sure it supposed to make some type of story...no hate
~stay up~
a yo man yung wun won that battle
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LMAO@ Youg votin for himself same Ip
wat nigga
lmao, he should be banned for voting for himself.....lol dumbass kid.
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fuk u bitch i didnt vote fo my self
nigga dat was my big bro wen he signed on
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