The Game of Life

[.Ovadose.]

Just Workin On Some Wordplay See If You Get It All
It My First Drop Here Enjoy....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=263006
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=262736


Life Is What You Make It The Open Holes U Gotta Take It..
Never Fumble Ya Paces Cuz Theres Always A Replacement..
You Only Got About 11 Friends So Use Them Wisely..
They Better Have Ya Back Or You'll Be Down Low Like The Isleys..
Be Heard Let The World Here Everything You Wanna Say..
Cuz Even The Illest Can Be Murked On Any Given Sunday..
As For Me Im Livin Mynes Just So I Can Rhyme Tight..
See Me Spittin In The Lot Under Friday Night Lights..
And My Love Life? Gotta Wifey So Forever We Mates..
So Wen Its Fourth Quarter I Will Argue Heaven Can Wait..
But Dont Twist I Never Let Up Raps A Part Of Me To..
Vets Im Betta Than You But Dont Get Varsity Blues..
Cuz One Day Ya'll Wont Have Someone There To But Kiss..
So What I'm Sayin To You Is Necessary Roughness..
Second Is Never Remembered So Play This Game Hard..
Cuz In The End People Look To Who Made The Longest Yard..
So Together Until The Last Down My Crew Will Be Fightin..
And I Hope After The Gods Will Remember My Titans..

[Hero.]

it was just okay, there wasn't really a line that stood out to me, the wordplay wasn't that good because you didn't really make it dope, but i can see that you'll get better and that your battle verses would be nice and complex, hit up "Just like he said" in my sig, thnx...

[2knig]

read this pimp shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=263189

i was just warming up