SE Championship: 1. Mr.Write Vs. 2. Phlymo

[Mystery~Murdera]

regular rules,
please vote on
all other battles.
Verses DUE:
Thursday, 12th

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[phlymo]

check

you wanna go 20?

[Mr W.Rite]

yea 20 is cool..
good luck

[phlymo]

ok here goes...

I wanna face a vet, but I’m yet to see real progress by you here
I’d render you helpless…but computers have been doing it for 2 years
I don’t regret the past, just drop my shit and pity who the worst is
But we all know ya rude…the days you thought up those shitty verses
Ugly bitch, think of the pros and cons and take my flows knocks
You get ya face smacked up this week - but at least ya save on botox
It took some real work to get here, and now I can’t wait to fight all
But Write’s easily made the final nine…worthy of the elite eight title
I guess ya searching for respect but I’ll be ending all ya missions
You deserve to be leaving with awards…worth of medical conditions
Competitions getting tight, the final four had better get their pace up
Write’s practically a shoe-in, since he needs his fucking tongue laced up
Ya just full of bland personals, forgive the threats I’ll make ‘em stop
But I’ll rip off ur upper arm…so you can finally have a humorous drop
Regardless of ya situation you still drop loads, that choice rocks
Write can spit like a machine - thanks to Stephen Hawking’s voicebox
Most the dope heads are left, now this is more than just a good league
But Write makes the tourney seamless…respectable than it should be
You’re an embarrassment bitch, it’s the same shit every drop I see
The last time Mr Write branched out - he got cut from his family tree


good luck mate.

[Mr W.Rite]

Feebs, M' , and W.Rite - then some, seven wonders runnin this shit
this bitch makes the eigth...which mean his ass just doesn’t exist
you dont belong, not to mention how you boast of dumb shit
fucka baton, my foot up your ass' something you can really run with
all you brits are the same, a bunch of scum...a bitch in diguise
fag had more chestnuts, to last thanksgiving and Christmas combined
bitch i fathered ya style, ya whole existence - i aint just talking beef
yo ask ya moms, i shook the world when her fat ass got off of me
he made some noise, blah whatever..I’m still defeatin him easily
the Peoples Champ?? Funny, not one even predicted he'd beat me
I hate to lose, to bad for you son…I’ll fuckin blaze this dude
you’re coming in second, that aint got shit to do with the lastest crew
the biggest disgrace, you aint ashamed, I say this hoe should leave
don’t give me props, just do your job and be the first to vote for me
you can tell I ran through’em, brand the loser, a faggot in doubt
I’d put my Mark on this fool, but then he’d just be askin’ him out
I ravage the south…been out for weeks, think he’d be worthy by now
But I bet half his shit looks more like a 1-2 tourney try out




-W.Rite

[Erupt]

I don’t regret the past, just drop my shit and pity who the worst is
But we all know ya rude…the days you thought up those shitty verses
It took some real work to get here, and now I can’t wait to fight all
But Write’s easily made the final nine…worthy of the elite eight title
I guess ya searching for respect but I’ll be ending all ya missions
You deserve to be leaving with awards…worth of medical conditions
Most the dope heads are left, now this is more than just a good league
But Write makes the tourney seamless…respectable than it should be

vs

Feebs, M' , and W.Rite - then some, seven wonders runnin this shit
this bitch makes the eigth...which mean his ass just doesn’t exist
you dont belong, not to mention how you boast of dumb shit
fucka baton, my foot up your ass' something you can really run with
he made some noise, blah whatever..I’m still defeatin him easily
the Peoples Champ?? Funny, not one even predicted he'd beat me
the biggest disgrace, you aint ashamed, I say this hoe should leave
don’t give me props, just do your job and be the first to vote for me
I ravage the south…been out for weeks, think he’d be worthy by now
But I bet half his shit looks more like a 1-2 tourney try out

best lines:

Most the dope heads are left, now this is more than just a good league
But Write makes the tourney seamless…respectable than it should be

the biggest disgrace, you aint ashamed, I say this hoe should leave
don’t give me props, just do your job and be the first to vote for me

he made some noise, blah whatever..I’m still defeatin him easily
the Peoples Champ?? Funny, not one even predicted he'd beat me
^best line of the battle.. evil. funny.. hard.. dope.


I've seen both of you come better but still a good battle..
I spyed a bit on incositency in writes verse this week though.. say that about anyone else and it seems normal but for Write.. at this stage in a tourney to have a few not dope lines is off.. lol. he's that good.. anyways. i hope its just coz you didnt have time or what not.. but nice showing from both..Write takes it though for a couple of really nice lines that had me laughing... Phylmo came decent but he had no personals.. write managed to conjure up the ones about votes etc and it payed off.. they were his best punches and I think they won him this battle.. so in the end Vote Write...

[Jacent.]

Ugly bitch, think of the pros and cons and take my flows knocks
You get ya face smacked up this week - but at least ya save on botox
Most the dope heads are left, now this is more than just a good league
But Write makes the tourney seamless…respectable than it should be

thats about all i liked from phlymo..

all you brits are the same, a bunch of scum...a bitch in diguise
fag had more chestnuts, to last thanksgiving and Christmas combined
the biggest disgrace, you aint ashamed, I say this hoe should leave
don’t give me props, just do your job and be the first to vote for me
I ravage the south…been out for weeks, think he’d be worthy by now
But I bet half his shit looks more like a 1-2 tourney try out

lmao that was fire from write


definitely liked this shit alot...but i'm goin w/ write here

[Exempt]

Competitions getting tight, the final four had better get their pace up
Write’s practically a shoe-in, since he needs his fucking tongue laced up
Ya just full of bland personals, forgive the threats I’ll make ‘em stop
But I’ll rip off ur upper arm…so you can finally have a humorous drop
I guess ya searching for respect but I’ll be ending all ya missions
You deserve to be leaving with awards…worth of medical conditions
Most the dope heads are left, now this is more than just a good league
But Write makes the tourney seamless…respectable than it should be


vs

Feebs, M' , and W.Rite - then some, seven wonders runnin this shit
this bitch makes the eigth...which mean his ass just doesn’t exist
you dont belong, not to mention how you boast of dumb shit
fucka baton, my foot up your ass' something you can really run with
he made some noise, blah whatever..I’m still defeatin him easily
the Peoples Champ?? Funny, not one even predicted he'd beat me
the biggest disgrace, you aint ashamed, I say this hoe should leave
don’t give me props, just do your job and be the first to vote for me
I ravage the south…been out for weeks, think he’d be worthy by now
But I bet half his shit looks more like a 1-2 tourney try out



well not a bad battle at all write just came nicer

[Mr. Key]

I don’t regret the past, just drop my shit and pity who the worst is
But we all know ya rude…the days you thought up those shitty verses
I guess ya searching for respect but I’ll be ending all ya missions
You deserve to be leaving with awards…worth of medical conditions
Most the dope heads are left, now this is more than just a good league
But Write makes the tourney seamless…respectable than it should be

vs

Feebs, M' , and W.Rite - then some, seven wonders runnin this shit
this bitch makes the eigth...which mean his ass just doesn’t exist
all you brits are the same, a bunch of scum...a bitch in diguise
fag had more chestnuts, to last thanksgiving and Christmas combined
he made some noise, blah whatever..I’m still defeatin him easily
the Peoples Champ?? Funny, not one even predicted he'd beat me
the biggest disgrace, you aint ashamed, I say this hoe should leave
don’t give me props, just do your job and be the first to vote for me

Kinda close, but Write takes it, he jus came harder.

[Richard Parker]

wow...this was so close to an upset... phlymo... keep coming with that kind of intensity and you could rise in this league fast. dont, and you won't.

way i see it is, write had the coming in second line and the vote for me line, phlymo had the seamless and the rude line... phlymo... had you dropped the botox line and a few others, and added in some personals or some more wordplay as good as the seamless... you would've won this battle. write... I'm kinda disappointed... as i said, had phlymo not made a few mistakes (by putting in some below average lines) he would've taken this... i think his quoteables slightly outmatched yours... but the rest of your verse outmatched his.. he had a couple played concepts, the family tree, the humorous.. you just kinda ran with what you had, the momma thing hurt your verse. but overall I was a bit disappointed. phlymo....phlymo.... i dont know what to say...this could've been your 'breakout battle'... it was close, i think if you can put together some good concepts in the future you will catch some people's eyes..


vote - write


but i almost voted against you, you bastard. this shit was even closer than the hens vs. key shit

[John Hensley]

I wanna face a vet, but I’m yet to see real progress by you here
I’d render you helpless…but computers have been doing it for 2 years
Ugly bitch, think of the pros and cons and take my flows knocks
You get ya face smacked up this week - but at least ya save on botox
Most the dope heads are left, now this is more than just a good league
But Write makes the tourney seamless…respectable than it should be

vs.


you dont belong, not to mention how you boast of dumb shit
fucka baton, my foot up your ass' something you can really run with
all you brits are the same, a bunch of scum...a bitch in diguise
fag had more chestnuts, to last thanksgiving and Christmas combined
lol this was funny

I hate to lose, to bad for you son…I’ll fuckin blaze this dude
you’re coming in second, that aint got shit to do with the lastest crew
I ravage the south…been out for weeks, think he’d be worthy by now
But I bet half his shit looks more like a 1-2 tourney try out


yeah, i got Write taking this too. Phylmo didn't drop bad or anything, just didn't have any lines that i really felt. Write had the funny chestnut line, one of those lines i'm surprised i have never seen. Overall Write dropped preetty nice, had some solid lines.

vote- write

[ExDaGawd]

Feebs, M' , and W.Rite - then some, seven wonders runnin this shit
this bitch makes the eigth...which mean his ass just doesn’t exist

^^LoL

you dont belong, not to mention how you boast of dumb shit
fucka baton, my foot up your ass' something you can really run with
all you brits are the same, a bunch of scum...a bitch in diguise
fag had more chestnuts, to last thanksgiving and Christmas combined

^Nice


vs.


Most the dope heads are left, now this is more than just a good league
But Write makes the tourney seamless…respectable than it should be

^^Good



V/ WRite

[Mystery~Murdera]

Write had some filler but his latest crew punch tore shit up.
That was dope. I think overall he punched harder. Phlymo had
some good lines but the steven hawkins line really brought his
verse down some... and it's late in the game for that.

v/ Write

[Mystery~Murdera]

Write advances