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    one nation under...

    One nation under god..
    Who are we tryna fool w/these kinda rules
    A man who applied the tools for youths to use
    Sohh they can learn from the mistakes that he used to do
    He cant change the world by himself..
    But he can w/help!
    His plan was felt & understood from children in his hood
    He provided guidence thru peripheral enlightenment
    Whats all the excitement in keep'n this man silent?
    He cant be a tyrant outside his environment
    George Bush doesnt care about black people
    The Terminator, Anorld Shwartzniqqa doesnt care about black people
    As long as they act like we-equal its much easier to be deceitful!
    As Godz peoples.. we trained to see thru evil
    Why not let the brotha live sohh he can help other kids?
    One nation under God should teach us to forgive
    Is there overwhelming proof he was guilty of what they say he did?
    Was there enough for Rodney King?
    Amongst other things, look at what the man brings to the world
    No he didnt make big name movies
    And they say for murder he was guilty for four
    But how many died in the Weapons of Mass Destructionless War?
    The peoples word will be ignored like those negroes who voted for gore
    Bill Clinton was almost impeached for having sex
    Yet knowone cares that G Dub has terroristict connects/assets
    Cash gets Magic a longer lease on life
    If the choice was up to me I'd leave the answer to Jesus Christ
    And I believe he would say to let Tookie live
    Sohh this is how I give.. by tellin you like it is!!!

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    I was in two minds over this.
    The general idea was sketchy I thought, you seemed to roam into several subjects rather than stick to one. It was pretty erratic in that sense. You started this off pretty cool, multies and stuff were there, and the flow was easy to find - but then you just stopped the scheme completely and seemed to go into a whole other line and that threw me a little. For the most part though, I enjoyed.

    Stick at it bro.

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