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    Write to this Picture XXVI

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    Alrighty. Use it as a warm up.

    Home movies, planned and staged, the sepia's engaged.
    From the look on her face, the flush of crimson; more than enraged,
    The grain was broken, wind fluttered and hugged her, the window open,
    What I thought was an innate cough, wasn't mellow, and she was choking,
    Her timid attitude in front of the camera tedious, the hand not feeding us,
    The resentment that overshadowed us from our daughter; not needing us,
    Her eyes were filled with tears, the bloodshot glance of "Happy Hour" cheers,
    A look that could be reached beyond the camera, facing our enormous fears,
    When I review and edit the tape, the pause was habitual, my mental state,
    Where there were once eyes, there were deep indentations, seeming to gape,

    And from this day on, the picture hangs in my room, charged on my Visa,
    It's a work of art, what I call the Solemn Gaze of our own Mona Lisa.
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    ... Suddenly your placed on a wall ...
    "Mirror Mirror on the wall who is the pretiest of them all"

    Mirror Response:
    Your sunken eyes show no mistake
    of the life that you take
    Your groved smile take a presence
    of your lifestyle with omnipresence
    Your are beautiful when your soul was still there
    But when you took your life it was fair
    Not for you but for your town
    which is why you were baried without a crown
    Your fleating peasent clothes do not fit you well
    To take your life means straight to hell
    Your blackend bones show no mercy
    and your words lack a sense of gramercy...
    My soultry angel I must take a breath
    but the pretiest thing was your death

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    yo miro la muerte
    no tengo la suerte
    ya no existe la mente
    el puro eskeleto...no meinte
    tu madre se seinte
    no te conveine
    hacer preteindente
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    i see death
    i have no luck
    the mind dosent exist
    the skull dosent lie
    your mother gets her feelings hurt
    it isnt worth it
    to be a pretender

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    I see it as you do not
    Fatigued and aching
    A shell of your former sea
    lost and drifting in endless waves
    And there lies the secret
    As you look past my skin
    Throught and beyond
    It is there you past lies
    A few achievements here and there

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    I Got two poems

    Looking at my own death just beneat me..
    Where my soul is kept...it's all there...
    Reflecting at me...Time To Time
    Every second that pass.....You get weaker
    My life get's short just by lookin at the face
    You know there is no turning back from da reaper
    So you get deeper n deeper until your last grasp of breathe
    You no long try.....then it's gets easier to retain it....


    Life lost, although I long to be Lost as a candle lit at noon, Lost as a snowflake in the sea. Death loves me, and Time finds me still A spirit beautiful and bright, Yet I am I, who long to be Lost as a light is lost in light. Oh plunge me deep in Death -- put out My senses, leave me deaf and blind, Swept by the tempest of ma Death, A taper in a Picture Frame comes to life

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    Water, the bringing of life, thou shall also take away.
    Such a silent death, for you not know when the day comes
    Typically scarey, but only if you can't scratch the surface
    Look deeper and see the years and life of torment
    Eyes are null, utilize senses to percieve the imagery
    Lose vision, it makes others stronger ten fold
    A sorrow full day, but instead think of the latter
    A life of misery ended, for he now rests with angels.
     

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    looks like my plastic surgery went dead wrong.
    I thold tha doctor if he knew what he was doin.
    He nodded his head and set the machine up to me.
    The physical pain ruching throught my fragile body,
    With my fat gushing our of my intestines first.
    I screamed but the doctor just increased the pressure.
    Slowly, like a setting a dog on fire, I was dying helplessly.
    Death got angry at me cause I was about to take his place.
    Ironcially, I managed to kill him before he got one on me.

    yeah.............................................. ............RETARDED.

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    such desolate grim...clothed in part
    by the rampant ways of victory.....the darkness of art
    skeletol remains the only sign of life
    cloaked...heavenly stroked...with a hint of strife
    therefore rendering incriments of the dead
    living as a peasant.....beggin for morsels of bread
    as the hood raises and the fierceness pasts
    the evil face of an angel forever seems to last
    rebuked by the many..plaguerized by the few
    subdued by the inquiries....remolded by the new
    beauty and evil crossed...product of witch's brew
    the switches flew...
    yeilding a personal frankenstein
    as i see this face it eases me to a final state of mind

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    under the flesh, or is it layed over
    damn, do skeleton bones need a makeover
    no sorrow or emotions shown in a skull
    just true thoughts and bones in a hull
    last words drowning as the thought pool is sinking
    losses of thousands is this the last words im thinking
    blood shed with tears headed for demise
    its hard to see clear with hollow eyes
    regrets impossible when its to late for repentance
    cuz mirrors cant show the inside of your bodies reflection

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    Arrow

    this night was different....
    odd to say the least...
    though no meat nore greenery entered me....
    4 double dipped LSD blotters were my feast....
    but even with the LSD, this night was odd to say the least....
    i found my mind corroding as i was moseying tripping off this whole scene...
    Walking ‘round threw deaths halls, phantasmagoric images stretching out from the walls...

    Yes this night was peculiar....
    Odd yes i must say....
    Walked for a while, for what seemed like 2 days....
    Saw a room that looked lucky and opened with rage....
    Darkness turned quickly to day, this night was odd yes i must say....
    Couldn’t fathom there’s a sole cuz how could it stay whole within the mind of that skull.....
    It made my sole vomit, it made my mind fall in, to see in deaths eye sockets....

    just an on the spot poem

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