Extreme Punchline Makeover

[BootyLover]

First person leaves a simple, pop rap style punchline that consists of two lines...

Second person changes that punchline into a dope, complex, punchline with metaphor, wordplay, multies, and/or other literary devices... And then leave another simple punchline that's two lines for the next person...

RULE: When you change the punchline above you, you have to keep the subject matter the same, but you can change basically everything else... You can do whatever subject when you leave the simple punchline for the next person.

Ready?

I'll crush your skull and leave you dead
while you cry and bleed all over the bed

[MISTA GRIM]

i'll rearange ur brain tendons and rip ya intestines
and i'll bang ya mouth on the bed until u get indigestion

[MISTA GRIM]

simple punch-
i'll bust ya grill and break ya face
i'll hang u with a nike shoe lace

[Lauren.]

Break loose dental knockin and mental poppin
N I'll tell u "jus do it" when ur gallow droppin

I can murder your family and get away
Rap is really not just a game I play

[MISTA GRIM]

rap is an occuptaion that takes most of my time
it ain't a damn game my weapon is rhyme

[Black Hornet]

your occupation's oblivious, you take up time with SHITTY POSTS,
your rhymes aren't WEAPONS, your just the KING of HITTIN POLLS!

*POLLS AS A DOUBLE MEANING!

[Percept]

ha style, since when can you post in here.... but yo prof. next simple punch?

[Black Hornet]

how you blast caps-
if your ass lacks GATS man?

[Percept]

percept is the cap-poppin' machine
w...t....f..... how the fuck you gonna shoot those things?
you cant take shit outta ya dreams!

simple

im appaled, that is all
ill staple ya nuts to the wall

[word perfect.]

check the punch im highly concerned, its in dismay
is all, ya worse then paul wall, staple? dismantle today.


simple punch

you lack cant make a decent crack
too lame always the same, your wack

[<Supreme>]

You not good enough to make a punch
You bitin rhymes as if it was your lunch

[<Supreme>]

simple punch

you cant flow to save your fuckin fat ass
Have you runnin and jumpin through glass

[B-ILL]

fat fuck, no luck ya' ass'll get grazed by all shot's
put a hole in ya' style, im deadly like blood clot's/

[B-ILL]

simple punch

jerkin' chains attatched to brain's i'll have you prayin' at knees
the last thing to ever happen after the rat took the cheese/

[ConArtest]

Pluckin nerves in ya cranium, Now you submit to supplication
My flows titanium, blowin minds, now Lost in Translation