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Thread: just ventin

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    just ventin

    I’m just sitting watching time go by
    1 second 2 seconds 3 4 5
    I look down at my wrists, they’re not slit, so my raps is still alive
    Cuz They hold me down through these hard times

    Now it is true that I spit original game
    But in a way, all this shit is the same
    Cuz everybody in this world feels pain
    We need it, just to keep us sane

    Now you can sit back and close your eyes
    Create your own mental disguise
    But this here, may lead to your own demise
    Because things will hit like a fucking surprise

    Look. I done seen, So many days, so many nights
    Heard of, So many goddamn pistol fights
    And it bites, Always getting caught up in the hype
    Like who killed pac or who sniped that little dike

    You already know when I get on the mic
    I spit the shit that I live in my life
    So I gotta use this music to vent when I write
    Cuz otherwise I be doing 25 to life

    Now I’ll admit I don’t know shit about no infrared sights
    Or, having scars from being stabbed with a knife
    But I do know that if you pussies push me tonight
    Then my reaction could be unpredictable, homie aight

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    now this isnt my best...but jus hit me up w/some feed

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    cmon lets get some feed

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    Very Simple And Forced Not To Say It Is Bad But Just Stating The Obvious...i Saw Some Good Points Made Here And Alot Of Good Thought I Will Say I Enjoyed This And With Minor Rewrite This Could Be A Banger Easily.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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