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    Love Song

    Heh its funny. Didn't know it could happen.. But hey.. Shit happens.
    -hook-
    What goes on between me and you/
    Is what will stay between me and you/
    There's nothing they can say or do/
    That would make them put their hands on you/
    You know I'd never do you wrong/
    I've been waiting for that right woman for so long/
    And... Baby you are the one/
    And that's why I'm making this love song/
    -verse-1-
    Kiss me baby. Touch me affectionatly/1
    Next to me directing me to infinite ectasy/2
    The stimulater the simulator of your freaky behavior/3
    THere's no one greater so lay back let me do you a favor/4
    Being your man is an honor I'm happy to have/5
    Never had an argument. we just chill be happy and laugh/6
    Unofficially married and you're my baby lady/7
    Beautifully spoken words of poetry and yet it only covers the basis/8
    Of my feelings. Saying I love you girl barely even scratched the surface/9
    Of what I feel about you baby. You're my soul mate for certain/10
    And i wanna kiss you in all the places that's soothing/11
    And maybe emulate some of the moves I've learned in porno movies/12
    Heh.. I'm just playin baby I admire yo sense of humor/13
    And with your personality. This prophet foresees a bright future/14
    With me and you doin what we both do best/15
    Just chill with each other and give the world a rest/16
    you know?
    -hook-
    What goes on between me and you/
    Is what will stay between me and you/
    There's nothing they can say or do/
    That would make them put their hands on you/
    You know I'd never do you wrong/
    I've been waiting for that right woman for so long/
    And... Baby you are the one/
    And that's why I'm making this love song/
    -verse-2-
    I've been patiently waiting for the day my baby came to me/1
    And told me everything would be alright and that she loved me/2
    And hugged me as I hugged her and told her how much I loved her/3
    Aside from the family and God and Jesus there's no one I treasure above her/4
    I trust her with my heart. I'll take bats to peoples backs if I have to/5
    Beat the crap out any faggot whoever wrongly approach you/6
    I love you baby/ You make me feel like a complete soldier/7
    You help me to lift this boulder set up on my shoulder/8
    You see..
    [sung]
    Sometimes I feel like I'm alone in this world/9
    But then I realize that I got me a wonderful girl/10
    Sometimes I think I'm crazy and I almost break down and cry/11
    But then you come and i feel at peace when I look into your eyes/12
    -hook-[sung by B. Irv]
    What goes on between me and you/
    Is what will stay between me and you/
    There's nothing they can say or do/
    That would make them put their hands on you/
    You know I'd never do you wrong/
    I've been waiting for that right woman for so long/
    And... Baby you are the one/
    And that's why I'm making this love song/
    -verse-3-
    Baby I need you. come let me hug you/1
    Come let me touch you and kiss you and love you/2
    And show you love that you have never ever witnessed/3
    And prove that I only need you I don't care for these other bitches/4
    Now look. I old you I loved you more than life in itself/5
    And I'm gonna say what I want I don't care if its corny as hell/6
    Do you know how I feel? Do you know the sacrifices I'll give/7
    I'll give it all just to kiss you one more time on yo lips/8
    From yo beautiful features to that sexy personality that you have/9
    You're more than I deserve but you're still with me baby and I'm glad/10
    Cuz I'm stuck with you just as tightly as you're stuck with me/11
    Infatuation my ass. People don't realize this is the real thing/12
    You're the realest thing ever to make an impact in my life/13
    The inner beast has been calmed. I no longer put up the fight/14
    Of trying hide behind the persona hating everything in my sight/15
    Now I'm real openminded and cool collected and the likes/16
    I no longer feel as though I'm walking alone in a world I don't belong/17
    I'm in familar territory with the one I most adore. My one and only love/18
    -hook-
    What goes on between me and you/
    Is what will stay between me and you/
    There's nothing they can say or do/
    That would make them put their hands on you/
    You know I'd never do you wrong/
    I've been waiting for that right woman for so long/
    And... Baby you are the one/
    And that's why I'm making this love song/

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    uppin for feed

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    yo i must say when it started i thought it was way to simple but as i fallow the pattern or rhythm i noticed how well it fallowed or flowed.the fglow was great it did need better creativety in line structure and delivery but this was areal good read.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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