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  1. December 22nd, 2005, 05:13 AM #16
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    you can throw punchlines in too here and there...stop bitchin 'for i drop some shit to outshine that Easy....

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  2. December 22nd, 2005, 09:56 AM #17
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    uhm pretty nice in places.. a few rhymes and words seemed like a bit of a mouthful.. and i feel the verse could of been broken down .. instead of one big paragrath..as it is quite long on the eye.. good consistancy still.. tho it seemed like your writing in poetry meter rather than rap flow.. so i see this as a poem/epic..which yes has many nice qualities... had a decent amount of dope multies..some rhymes seemed basic but i guess worked all the same..

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  3. December 23rd, 2005, 06:52 PM #18
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  6. December 26th, 2005, 07:20 PM #21
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