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Topic:make 1 up put it above your story
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Topic:make 1 up put it above your story
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nah dawg, post a topic cause i want it to be fair.....
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ok does emergency room work or another 1?
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how about growing up...............................
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do it on wer ur 4om or sumtin
quit freepostin. and speak english.................
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ima teenager, but most of the times i act like a man
being a leader, and not a follower, get a life without a helping hand
we all try to act tough, but sometimes were not really
i remember when i was 11, i used to get punk'd by bullies
but i sware, if any of them niggas come thorugh my hood, and den
u know there' gonna be gone, cause they were in a place they shouldn't been
times is rough, just like the life of eminem in the dark
some people a end up just like he was, living in trailer parks
but im not him, so i know i can survive
strength is all i need, to mainly protect my own live
raps just no for fun, there'e for livings
so this christmas, i gotta depend on myself, caue this year, my parents an't giving
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Topic:emergenecy room
My eyes were hazy when i retaliated,then i heard strange voices saying"hes loosing oxygen and his heart rate is slowing down to almost a stop"I couldn't remember what happened to make me in this life loosing perdicument then all of a sudden i started to hear car horns then i heard the doctors again i couldn't understand what was happening to me then i saw a bright light then it hit me i saw car lightsthey was so bright that they blinded me and i couldn't see where i was going,then my tires started to loose traction it seems like i was hydraplaining all over the road then our cars made a earthquaking sonic noise of metal clashing,i was fortunate enoguh to have my seat belt on becuase i would have flew right out of of the car and onto the road,someone must have called 911 becuse the aumbuleince was there in a second,they rushed me on the strecher and started to hook life-support on my bloody chest and hooked a oxygeen tank up to me,then i was back at the emergenecy roomWhen i came too later the doctors told me i barley survived and i was very fortunate to be alive,
yo soz i already started posting emergenecy rooma nd didn't see u say growing up well just keep it like that and see who did the best on there topic
Topical Heat- Wow seriously...that was a story...where the fuck is the flow? You had no rhyme scheme at all...read your verse...it ain't a verse...it's not even a rap...good luck in the story section of this website...stay the fuck out of here with that shit^...
Verbal- Not bad...I've never seen franchize do a topical before...this was pretty decent complared to your old shit...with the /////<<Lame ass bars and shit like that...lol you did good here, nice plot but you kept it real short...topicals, to be good, need more than 20 lines...good job non-the-less...keep it up
V/Verbal for better verse...
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thanx uppin 2......................................
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My eyes were hazy when i retaliated,then i heard strange voices saying"hes loosing oxygen and his heart rate is slowing down to almost a stop"I couldn't remember what happened to make me in this life
[B]No flow really wasnt feelin it.
VS
ima teenager, but most of the times i act like a man
being a leader, and not a follower, get a life without a helping hand
we all try to act tough, but sometimes were not really
i remember when i was 11, i used to get punk'd by bullies
but i sware, if any of them niggas come thorugh my hood, and den
u know there' gonna be gone, cause they were in a place they shouldn't been
times is rough, just like the life of eminem in the dark
some people a end up just like he was, living in trailer parks
but im not him, so i know i can survive
strength is all i need, to mainly protect my own live
raps just no for fun, there'e for livings
so this christmas, i gotta depend on myself, caue this year, my parents an't giving
Str8 flow stayed on topic..In depth spit.
Vote-Verbal, no hate but he came wit a more complex verse
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