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Last edited by Po'; December 21st, 2005 at 06:25 PM
Yo dog, that was a tight ass fucking om man, damn, there was so much flow and imagiry, vocab could be better, but damn.
10/10
this was good, like everything that i saw in this OM, from beginnning to end i kept me on the edge of my seat wanting more, liked the imagary through the whole thing, i was able to picture everything that was said through your lines, everything flowed well together, i don't really have a favorite line cause everything was good, this is a great if not best OM mic i have read in a while, keep it up
Good Job
TNL
Cool, thanks alot man.
omfg god nigga that is how u do it that is the best one i have ever heard on this site my favorite linz were
Theres no way out of here, and life’s, not about to clear..
A life supply of water, only when I count my tears..
dam nigga i think ur the best one on this sight with topical good lookin dawg
Thanks.
Last edited by Po'; December 21st, 2005 at 06:26 PM
everyone who reads this needs to nominate it for the hof for december uppin this shit is awsome
Yo feel that it takes a lot of being intooned to ur emotions to write liek that and i cant tell buy your writing that you are very well done.. I could feel the same pain he felt as i was reading through it felt like i was rite there with him some thing i enjoyed reading and for that i thank you...
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Well, thanks for the feed guys.
You cant really say, "the best Ive read on here in a while." When you joined no more than a month ago.
Thanks though.
Very good piece. The whole topic of basically being povern spreads throughout and you stay on topic the whole way through. The flow does not drag on which makes it more of a realistic writing and more interesting to the readers mind. This is a great read, I felt is if I read a story of a man and his life through thick and thin with all the exclusive imagery you have drawn. Incredible piece again.
Rating 9/10
Please critiquie my piece The Night Of Ecstasy
Thankyou.
lol those other 2 had like 65 post and they say its the best the have read in awhile lol
but it was a nice piece props again and it should be a 10/10 hahahahahaha but seriosly it is the best piece i have ever read on this site
lambragini first off...if seen/written more poetical scriptures than youve heard of in your life, so please dont act like I do not know what I am talking about. Post an open mic scripture then we will see
umm i am a text head
Please dont freepost in here.
Thankyou both.
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