HW Title - Macabre (3-0) vs DaTrusHurtz (3-0)

[Philly®]

i was looking forward to this match.........

[Sobe]

I wasn't.

[Vaskez]

here's some feedback if ya care about my opinion...

Bitch I read all ya verses n' they make me burn things
Cuz you've United so many wack concepts that ya finally earned wings
^^heh pretty coo, and I see ya finally took my advice (in the last few verses) and stopped doing 1-syllable rhyming, coo

All these wack kids think your dope but ya fate has been sealed
Cuz the ONLY way you'd be a legend was if Zelda was real
^^meh concept
Trus has all the bitches n' you'll be poor, its a given
I got it made by the minute, you'll make minute maid for a livin'
^^lol corny but funny
Nothin' ya need is missin', but listen to all my views, bitch
Ya lifestyles got TONS of girls...
...telling ya having condoms is useless
^^worded kinda indirect but I see where ya coming from. Needs more direct wording
The Jr league used to have a wack rep n' ya gonna get flicked off
Cuz I'm seeing you bring it back...
...now Aines n' lil Wayne are pissed off
^^lol, kinda funny
You n' peeps are never in sync, think ya cool? Ya stink
Punk your so disliked, even your best partnership would sink
^^words ending in -ship and sink wordplay is kinda played (yeah I hate it when I gotta say that) and lol @ the corny "ya stink"

I love running backs n' football who ain't runnin' shoddy
I saw the best hand off the other day...
...by looking at this fag's body
^^heh, ok

[KempoMRK]

Bitch I read all ya verses n' they make me burn things
Cuz you've United so many wack concepts that ya finally earned wings
Setup coulda linked in to make this dope, but it was a cool punch
All these wack kids think your dope but ya fate has been sealed
Cuz the ONLY way you'd be a legend was if Zelda was real
Nah, wasn't feeling the wording on this, made the concept too weak
Trus has all the bitches n' you'll be poor, its a given
I got it made by the minute, you'll make minute maid for a livin'
Not bad, fresh concept
Nothin' ya need is missin', but listen to all my views, bitch
Ya lifestyles got TONS of girls...
...telling ya having condoms is useless
So so, didn't hit
The Jr league used to have a wack rep n' ya gonna get flicked off
Cuz I'm seeing you bring it back...
...now Aines n' lil Wayne are pissed off
So so
You n' peeps are never in sync, think ya cool? Ya stink
Punk your so disliked, even your best partnership would sink
Huh?
I love running backs n' football who ain't runnin' shoddy
I saw the best hand off the other day...
...by looking at this fag's body
Cool, well worded

Cool verse, some of the punches didn't hit, but ur wording is pretty cool on most. Some of your concepts were a bit weak though.

[Aines]

hmmmm

Mac your gone for a week

how come you never showed?

DaTrusHurtz (4-0)