nice fam...vocab was fire...some gud similies in thurr...
couple a mettas...flow was overall consistant...i aint
got to much critique...some of the transitions was
shaky but nuttn to much...i only seen one line which
you shoud seriously think about changin it just doesnt
belong in hurr...
a puppet whose dull as a bulb in broke lamps
dumber than deadbeat dads dying to buy cars with food stamps
bad flow,streched bad,transition,get rid of it fam...
its killin ya piece ...ya feel...no hate cos i liked dis shit
creative as fuck,keep em commin , im out