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  1. December 16th, 2005, 02:57 AM #16
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    nice fam...vocab was fire...some gud similies in thurr...
    couple a mettas...flow was overall consistant...i aint
    got to much critique...some of the transitions was
    shaky but nuttn to much...i only seen one line which
    you shoud seriously think about changin it just doesnt
    belong in hurr...

    a puppet whose dull as a bulb in broke lamps
    dumber than deadbeat dads dying to buy cars with food stamps

    bad flow,streched bad,transition,get rid of it fam...
    its killin ya piece ...ya feel...no hate cos i liked dis shit
    creative as fuck,keep em commin , im out
  2. December 19th, 2005, 03:25 AM #17
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    Quote Originally Posted by StRiNgThEoRy
    oh, and do ya research, cuz the illuminati was a scientific organisation who were against religion's views on science...they weren't no terrorists, they were smart people...

    ~1~

    i wasn't really pointing it at just terrorist organizations, but i see why you thought that....i really was just using groups of "secret organizations" that are blamed for the many failures of our government


    but yeh, thanks for the feedback guys, i really appreciate it, and i'll hit you guys up first chance i get
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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  3. December 22nd, 2005, 03:23 AM #18
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    don't leave without feeding!
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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  4. December 27th, 2005, 10:10 PM #19
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    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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  5. December 28th, 2005, 10:44 AM #20
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    gd drop
    i ws feelin this
    gd wordplay
    gd flow
    gdish structure
    i liked this piece

    keep @ it
  6. January 7th, 2006, 10:49 PM #21
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    read and reveiewwww plz
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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  7. February 9th, 2006, 12:09 PM #22
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    pooppp that
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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  8. February 9th, 2006, 12:13 PM #23
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    word you havent got too much feed i see, well this was a nice piece man it was very complex i didnt see anything really bad that stuck out, you deffinately got structure and flow, some nice use of your multies and vocab i wouldnt say you perfect yet but you gettin there keep workin at it to get better, id give this a 9/10, hit my OM up in sig please need some good feed,

    ~1~
  9. February 9th, 2006, 12:15 PM #24
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    This was a good peice, sort of a common topic but i liked thr way you told your views, nice choice of words, good multies and a decent structure. as someone said before dont do it in blue next time, sort of distracting. Keep It Up.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=271070

    read n feed. Thanks.
  10. February 9th, 2006, 05:16 PM #25
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