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    apocolypsE noW

    Let me tell you about APOCOLYPSE now
    The forced annihalation of Muslims, Christians, and Taos
    All religions, all races, the radical and the passive,
    no one will escape the horrendous, and massive
    end of days as we call it, but NOT by God's hand
    Apocolypse will come by the blunders of Man.

    Drugged masses like chinese were with opium habits,
    Succumbingly numb in the government has us
    infatuated not hated we beam at their status
    they laugh at our ignorance, and plan to backstab us

    You think it's inconceivable like 2 sterile people?
    that a government will kill citizens to make itself lethal
    dropping 2 towers and anthrax, preventing we breath full
    overpowering, leave us cowering, and leave us so feeble

    Taliban, Illuminati, Al Queda, all the same
    Priory of Scion, they're lyin, there's just one group to blame
    A democratic Jihad, they're playin one helluva game
    trying to change the planet's name to the US of A

    Propoganda round the world blamed tectonic plates
    even though atomic particles were found in the waves
    consequences taken, thought out, and then weighed
    waves raped em, arranged for cadavers be laid

    Niggas caught up by dealing rocks monthly
    that the government brought up with our taxable money
    drugs havoc on the rich, poor, healthy, and weary
    all truthful, not some made up conspiracy theory

    A two-sided blade who's hypocrisy hidden
    the whitey's who provide em, are the ones who fucken forbid em
    Acquit em, and quittin their freedom is given,
    to hit men who hit them with institutionalized livin

    Distort us with wars to give veterans stories they fought in
    they leave us with woes then blame Osama Bin Laden
    Despicable unbelieveable you belive news that is brought in
    by politicians whose souls have gotten to rottin

    Allegations are laid away from Bush's camp
    more outrageous than a faget claimin menstrual cramps
    a puppet whose dull as a bulb in broke lamps
    dumber than deadbeat dads dying to buy cars with food stamps

    Let me tell you about APOCOLYPSE now
    The forced annihalation of Muslims, Christians, and Taos
    All religions, all races, the radical and the passive,
    no one will escape the horrendous, and massive
    end of days as we call it, but NOT by God's hand
    Apocolypse will come by the blunders of Man.



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    Last edited by soberSEOULja; December 4th, 2005 at 02:08 PM
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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    Yo this was sum good shit....i was feelin the topic and the deatail you put into this and the great flow smooth as hel..easy read...rhymes were good ..you had sum multies/doubles and sum good rhymes not too simple..i lked this drop..keep it up...peace--

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    thanks man.....i've been readin and liked alot of your shit too =)....uppin for more feedback!
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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    more feed plzzz
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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    hollaaa blipppity booo bah
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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    thanks for the feedback ^^
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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    I liked this it was well thought out, the wordplay was good also, I love a bit of wordplay it always makes an MC stand out ya know.
    You abvioulsy know a little about what you speak to which is good, I hate listening or reading peoples stuff when its obvious there trying to talk the talk but dont know what there on about.
    Its not unlike what ive written, same kinda topic anyways which is why I had a look in the first place.
    Keep it up.
    Repetitively battling better than all competitors!

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    thanks for the feed guys....XL and pakaveli...if u have other peices out....why dont u send a link so i can read?...i'm always up to read some bites other than stereotypical shit about how gangsta u are, blah blah
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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    Nice choice of wordz.
    I was feelin tha rhymes in tha joint

    Keep doing ya thang ima watch for ya

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    thx for the feed, i'll make sure to hit ur beats up
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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    leave a note before u head out ^^
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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    bump ittt
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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    read my siggy, im a fat kid
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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    Wordplay: Great
    Vocab: Good
    Flow: Good
    Structure: Finally, i see some structure...

    ADVICE:
    Juss keep elevating, u doin good...only thing i can suggest is to get rid of the blue cuz the contrast is a bit hard on the eyes...

    VERDICT: 8/10, Dope piece

    ...Fantastic...


    PS: Peep my open mic's in my sig...and battles....

    ~1~

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    oh, and do ya research, cuz the illuminati was a scientific organisation who were against religion's views on science...they weren't no terrorists, they were smart people...

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