Pimpin

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Hook2
-Ima pimp and a (Mac) just with out that (Cheese)-
-Got yo hoe in tha back givin head for free-
-Bitch Ima P.I.M.P
-Bitch Ima P.I.M.P
-Bitch Ima P.I.M.P
-Bitch Ima P.I.M.P

-Time ta take this pimp shit to a whole nother level-
-Keep dropin (Hot Shit) like tha ass of tha (Devil)-
-Ima pimp i'll leave a bitch back hurt swellin-
-put that wood in her belly then my name she be yellin-
-Ima pimp in a mac just with out tha cheese-
-Gotta chick in tha back that will fuck for weed-
-Just ta get on a track she'll buckle them knees-
-Real talk got moe (Hoes) then a pack of (CD's)-
-Got your in tha back givin head for free-
-Ima spit it like a mac until a nigga fuck {Free}-106 & Park
-And if yo bitch get slaped look it might be me-
-I been pimpin in tha trap since (My Brother & Me)-
-(Nick Na Nick Na Nick Na) I know yall feelin me-
-Ima Pimp first class like Snoop D.O Double G-
-Find me C walkin on yo block throughin up that C-
-Betta ask around nigga it's pimpin in me-


Hook2
-Ima pimp and a (Mac) just with out that (Cheese)-
-Got yo hoe in tha back givin head for free-
-Bitch Ima P.I.M.P
-Bitch Ima P.I.M.P
-Bitch Ima P.I.M.P
-Bitch Ima P.I.M.P


It's my first post show a nigga some luv

[mcl]

some great rhymews in there and the flow was tight, 9/10 keep it up

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uppin....

[Arch]

This was aight... especially for ur first OM
some decent rhymes, i liked it.
I gotta give u some criticism though, to help give you something to work on.
Only thing it really lacked was creativeness, and a bit of imagination i thought. but overall good shit.
Also, When ur doing Open Mics, alotta people agree that writing somethin that kinda has a story to it, with a meaning etc... are tight, so maybe try somethin like that next time.

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yea thanks arch for tha tips

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