Infinite Flow + Infinite Skill = Innevitability.

[-IsIs-]

*scratch in - I aint hardcore I dont pack a Nine millimetre - scratch out*
*scratch in - Most of yall gangsta rappers aint hardcore neither* scratch out*

Spartan techniques, a gladiator to the bone,
navigator to aggitators track the ways Im shown,
fractions of factions couldnt be heavier distractions,
but in fact son, Im lackin traction in my actions,
Im pacin back and forth, to find the final solutions,
improvin mixture confusion, illusions in my conclusion,
Intrusion constitutes delusion, in its spinal fusion,
Final resolution, take control of your cerebral,
imperial people are decietful when they great you,
defeat you is in there brain, fatal mind collisions,
improvisons show mal nutrishion in traditions,
binary fission, real visions of my mind state,
incline great, keep twistin untill some spines break,
I thank them, for placin me in my inner sanctum,

Takin time for myself, infinite skills one possesses,
stresses impress the guests as I infest this,
bless the mic with flow once I claim fortune,
extortion of absorbsion in the money auction,
stoppin shows for .Stats. haunts the stage,
taunts with rage the emcees I wish to stomp and claim,
spawn my fame, Im on the game, but I dont Want it,
I was shawn it, but my destiny its mine to spit on it,
The life lesson for me is to never choose the fame,
bruise my name but I will never let money fool my brain,
stain the pages with my mystical invisible ink,
transitional stages, and my ambitons will sink.
think of the days back when we was grace,
face the discrace of tracing hip hops waste,
recycling great emcees, just to awake fakes,
It takes a mind of knowledge to understand my logic,
money is an object, and death is the topic for your optic.

[EyeBite]

this was pretty good man..i was feelin the topic and the flow
interesting and smooth and rhymes were good
vocab was reeally tight....overrall this was tight
keep it up....peace--

[-IsIs-]

Thanks for the Feed. Uppin.

[-IsIs-]

Links.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254087

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254119

[mcl]

great piece some real good rhymes u got that piece killed 9/10

[-IsIs-]

thanks for that b.

[-IsIs-]

uppin for feedback.

[2hot2handle]

That sucked

LOL, just kiddin.

This was good. I loved ya rhymes and how u took advantage of ur vocab. The rhyme scheme needs some work though. It seemed like it was scrambled. I know what u tryin to do and i have problems with rhyme scheme too. I put in a bunch of rhymes that will sound dope on audio but as text it needs a scheme. This would sound great on audio. And audio dudes use schemes too. Flow was good, structure can do better, looked a lil bit off at some points and remember structure helps ya flow. Not many people take advantage of the vocab. I like the direction you are taking and this piece had good metaphors. Keep workin man and do something like for a scheme:

A..........B
A..........B

U had many rhymes in the middle of lines and thats good but it gotta be in a pattern.

The most played out one is:

.....a
......a
......b
......b

You see. So use patterns and it will look better. U did well and keep writin.

[-IsIs-]

thanks for that man. yea im still tryin to get a real dope beat to put it on audio.

[-IsIs-]

Uppin For Feedback.