Str8 up...
Mist- nice verse, I don't think most of it was neccessary tho...leave the last 4 bars of your verse and thats exactly what really pertains to the topic...vocab and multis and metas were all good I must say tho...killed it in this one...I liked it keep it up and what not...took this battle easy for complexity and imagery and shit...yes I said it shit ...Nice approach to it tooo...very different than I was thinkin'
MOUSE- I fuckin' hate puttin those periods in...you had an alright verse for ur first try...you could have stuck some vocab in it cuz topical isn't like txt stick punches in and fuck vocab and complexity this is the real deal...mutlis metas, vocab, complexity AND imagery all play a part and I didn't really feel that in urs...I could see some things but not all and the verse was simplistic but it was an alright appproch to the topic, you need to get more creative with it tho...keep it up and you'll get it tho...
V/ Blind Mist
...linx n mah sigg-e...pz nigz ...