Championship Match: Feeble Minded (10-2) Vs. Mr.Write (6-2)

[Mystery~Murdera]

verses due Dec 2nd 12 EST
3 links = 3 votes
normal rules...
voting will end on Monday.

now checkin...

[Mr W.Rite]

sup feebs

in..
we'll go whatever, whenever

out

[Richard Parker]

sup dude

did MM extend this? either way, good looks on giving people time considering the holiday M~M. g'luck write

[Mr W.Rite]

16 match...




i've run thru the worse, trampled the best, for you feebs im plain gunning
and i hope the light at the end of the tunnel you see is a train coming
i stay running, the leagues mine...and i aint impressed with ya raps fool
so bring a best, i don t mean...whinning, wack wordplay and track shoes
the facts prove, im way better, remember the whippin i put on you holmes
most agreed, that battled would've made legends, if you wouldnt have shown
what crew ya with now - the competion is over - he aint come to be choosey
i heard you werent really a member, but more like one of its groupies
you've had rivals galour...tooks on crews, hell i laughed when u fixed'em
deja split - this dumbass joined the same crew a week after he dissed'em
i blast queers...roastin u dude, aint fronting just gettin the facts cleared
after this - LLL will be how many he's managed against me in the past year
we'll be friends, dont cry bitch...but for now im coming to hurt you
going nowhere fast, no wonder u took up a hobby running in circles
nearing the end, known for dickriding and latley he's repeatin the trend
Evolve biggest fan, no telling what u did to get him competing again
dudes a bum, thinks he back on top, so im after ya dome, best
ya...he came outta nowhere, but dam so do the rest of the homeless




-W.Rite

[Richard Parker]

quit lying, if you say im in the competition again so much cursing'll happen
you aint as good as the next guy, just got more fake personals than him
your finished, this is the rematch, bitch you'll get defeated at last
cuz I'm not gonna play around was enough time to see that your wack
gettin feebz to attack, the genius is back, your flips are finally played
you've shown all u stand for..even your represents your style these days
& you only post battles, as far as common sense i aint factually rude bitch
i just find it stupid, you log on aim more times than you actually use it
i aint trying to be racist, I'm just sayin ya dumb, without scorning ya tutors
dont post ya best work, that'd require links to welfare on the computer
your so quick to post, so much for effort, posting those rhymes in a hurry
still on that FL tip... & the fact that you call it keying kinda disturbs me
I can write your punches better, i know - the sonning confounds you
thank Gates, for naming his system after what i'm running around you
its coming down to.. your overrated, you been yearning to throw down
ya skills between you and me, & u were never good at learning ya pronouns

[Richard Parker]

vote fuckas

[Monstrous]

Dude, neither verse was even good

[Richard Parker]

^ I almost banned you for posting in here. don't let it happen again

[Erupt]

i've run thru the worse, trampled the best, for you feebs im plain gunning
and i hope the light at the end of the tunnel you see is a train coming
you've had rivals galour...tooks on crews, hell i laughed when u fixed'em
deja split - this dumbass joined the same crew a week after he dissed'em
i blast queers...roastin u dude, aint fronting just gettin the facts cleared
after this - LLL will be how many he's managed against me in the past year
dudes a bum, thinks he back on top, so im after ya dome, best
ya...he came outta nowhere, but dam so do the rest of the homeless

vs

& you only post battles, as far as common sense i aint factually rude bitch
i just find it stupid, you log on aim more times than you actually use it
i aint trying to be racist, I'm just sayin ya dumb, without scorning ya tutors
dont post ya best work, that'd require links to welfare on the computer
its coming down to.. your overrated, you been yearning to throw down
ya skills between you and me, & u were never good at learning ya pronouns

got Write winning by one bar...
decent battle..

[Sergio...]

write had
the running circles and LLL line


feeble had
the represents line


that's it..lines were reallly reallly long.

vote-write

[Born To Kill]

i've run thru the worse, trampled the best, for you feebs im plain gunning
and i hope the light at the end of the tunnel you see is a train coming
Blah...played concept...
i stay running, the leagues mine...and i aint impressed with ya raps fool
so bring a best, i don t mean...whinning, wack wordplay and track shoes
Eh...
the facts prove, im way better, remember the whippin i put on you holmes
most agreed, that battled would've made legends, if you wouldnt have shown
Eh...
what crew ya with now - the competion is over - he aint come to be choosey
i heard you werent really a member, but more like one of its groupies
Decent...
you've had rivals galour...tooks on crews, hell i laughed when u fixed'em
deja split - this dumbass joined the same crew a week after he dissed'em
I guess...
i blast queers...roastin u dude, aint fronting just gettin the facts cleared
after this - LLL will be how many he's managed against me in the past year
Nice, I guess...
we'll be friends, dont cry bitch...but for now im coming to hurt you
going nowhere fast, no wonder u took up a hobby running in circles
Didn't like...
nearing the end, known for dickriding and latley he's repeatin the trend
Evolve biggest fan, no telling what u did to get him competing again
Blah...
dudes a bum, thinks he back on top, so im after ya dome, best
ya...he came outta nowhere, but dam so do the rest of the homeless
Eh...ok, I guess...

I dunno...where's the wit? All I see are statements and I dunno...
I'm just not vibing with this verse at all.

quit lying, if you say im in the competition again so much cursing'll happen
you aint as good as the next guy, just got more fake personals than him
Didn't rhyme, but ok...
your finished, this is the rematch, bitch you'll get defeated at last
cuz I'm not gonna play around was enough time to see that your wack
Eh...
gettin feebz to attack, the genius is back, your flips are finally played
you've shown all u stand for..even your represents your style these days
Eh...
& you only post battles, as far as common sense i aint factually rude bitch
i just find it stupid, you log on aim more times than you actually use it
Nice...horrible wording, but nice hit...
i aint trying to be racist, I'm just sayin ya dumb, without scorning ya tutors
dont post ya best work, that'd require links to welfare on the computer
Huh?
your so quick to post, so much for effort, posting those rhymes in a hurry
still on that FL tip... & the fact that you call it keying kinda disturbs me
Decent...sorta funny...
I can write your punches better, i know - the sonning confounds you
thank Gates, for naming his system after what i'm running around you
Huh? Ya running Microsoft? Windows? Huh?
its coming down to.. your overrated, you been yearning to throw down
ya skills between you and me, & u were never good at learning ya pronouns
Funny closer...

I really didn't care for much Feebs had either...
I dunno what's up with this new, bland ass style everyone thinks is so hot.
Reads a bit boring to me.

But I think Feebs had a few decent joints in there...

So, Vote: Feebs

[Mystery~Murdera]

Mr Write wins (7-2)
& Feebs loses (10-3)