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    Emotions Ft. Def Reaper

    Emotions...





    [Def Reper]
    I need love...Like LL, I can't move forward
    I'm down 0-1, I need more points on the scoreboard
    All my friends have found thiers, but mine seems lost
    Right now I'm willing to buy it, no matter the cost
    I've heard some speak about, even read about it
    They always say "Yours will come"...
    ...But I say "We'll see about it"
    I can't be without it, I dunno why but I'm empty
    Simply to put it simply, I need love to fufill me
    I know it may sound silly, but I feel a void inside me
    Nowhere near the surface, but deep down in hiding...
    Providing a mental and emotional distress...
    My physical is in impeccable condition, nonetheless
    I have had a mistress, and even a main squeeze
    But none of these women came close to meeting my needs
    I can't believe how long I've been without a love
    32 long years, with no social life, no wife...
    ...and me, not being a hub
    Well enough is enough, I'll set out on a quest
    Whatever tomorrow brings, and I'm hoping for the best
    I'll fill that void in my chest, make my dreams become reality
    No if ands or buts, maybes or other technicalities
    I'll find love and make it work, Emotional euphroria or bust
    I know love is ready for me, but am I ready to leave lust?
    Ahh shucks who knows, but that brings another question to mind
    How will Love know how to find me if...Love is blind?


    [Syco]
    What makes me smile is ur smile and ur inner glow
    Without u,I get bigger woes..feels like ive been sent to where the sinners go
    Our loves steeper...urs flows like the ocean but much deeper
    Questioned myself?? sayin, “Id be a fool not to keep her”
    Got cold feet thinking of our future hot conjunction
    It’s a lot of something, without u I would stop to function
    Blown and shot to nothing, and this poem... had to flow it
    Like a poet, times I said my love for u was deep but didn’t show it
    Grab a tissue ull be cryin from hearin... damn I miss u
    Touch u, hold ya hands and kiss u, sorry I didn’t man the issue
    Ive been half stepping in this race, goin the whole mile
    3 ˝ yrs, still remember on myspace checkin ya profile
    Memories of being beside u...the music we got our vibes to
    Constant reminders to show u no one loves u much as I do
    The paths ruined?...nah...watchin ourselves like our backs glued in
    Ya kiss...now that’s soothin and each one, im attached to em
    Still my precious...proud of watchin my angel spreadin wings
    But I feel were too young for vows and silver weddin rings
    Trust my plan, ur loves one in a million and lust is grand
    Pease forgive me..im not always just but know im just a man
    Made a great fall for me...but none of our summers good
    U wanna be heard...be missed but not a “miss understood”
    We spit harsh words but dont mean em...we both struggle to beat em
    What we have is like America im just tryin to enjoy my freedom
    Fundamental differences....but routines stayed the same
    Promises are like dollars...meant to be broken...but I don’t wanna change
    Sorry for how im actin and im sorry that I ever doubt u
    I spit expressions in metaphors...but this ones really about u………

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    love this open mic. can relate a lot to both of ur verses. structure was nice and easy to read. both had nice multis and the lyrics were real deep and down to earth. love the topic and this was a dope colab lets keep them coming lol. keep this up.

    ~1~

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    ^^^ no problem...

    uppin for more feed nigz
    Death to All Comers..

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    nice ass verse homie u all did good for real i really dont think yall need to elvate lolz

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    Uppin Dont Sleep On This
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    Please Leave Feed
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    Damn Niggas Cant Leave Feed These Days

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    I thought this was a dope collabo. I didnt think id like it cause love/relationship type pieces aint my thing but i actually enjoyed reading this piece. The concept was nothing new but you both brought something different to the table for the concept you didnt make your verses corny which normally happens with these types of oms so i'll give you props for making me like a piece i normally wouldnt. Reaper i thought your verse was nice on the vocab tip, it was real descriptive you got your feelings about the past present etc out in good detail. Obviously the vocab helped your imagery out so it was a good solid verse. Syc i thought your verse was slightly better just because the flow was nicer and you mixed in the multies so your verse was slightly more complex. So overall a played out concept but you made the verses stand out to me so i thought this was a dope piece.
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    i can realte to most parts of your verses. but the topic is alittle played, however you both brought this from different views which mad it vrey good

    keep pennin'

    and peep "standing at the grave"

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    this was tight nice vocab the flow was sick i can relate to this so its good nice topic

    i give this 7-10

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