10 lines
normal rules
10 min checkin
30 min spit
no hate/dr/crew votes
psykosis
KkiLLa34
10 lines
normal rules
10 min checkin
30 min spit
no hate/dr/crew votes
checking in where r u dont duck bitch
stfu you faggot i'll check the fuck in when i want to...and no this aint a check
bitch stop prewritin ur shit pussy
czeck
since your gona wait for me to drop match me.
i dont care who ever drops first im almost done mine
Like I was a vegetarian ill “put the beef aside”
………………………..U been here since Oct.?
its like ur crippled ur skills don’t excel they just bide
And I aint no pirate but ill take homo to the plank
………………………….We cant even see u
Cause u ridin solo in the ranks
Shit ill leave “psy” in “ko” like I just “beat” his “sis”
……………………………cause I been here for a month
and even if u was hammers cousin u still couldn’t touch this
and u being “psykosis” kid “trust me I don’t care”
u way below ma level u got me asking he “underwear”
took his time to check in cause he was prewritin his shit
……………………………….. and this kid says he “fat”
no wonder people saying he tight cause his clothes about to rip
nuff said
kkk fuck this kid......its funny how his courage is half hearted
give em black eye's cause he showin rb's how to get retarded
i real feel sorry fa "killa" cause even his verse's are lacking
not just his name but even his "wordplay" is tacky
fareal ya weight failing....stop nibblin at my knees
cause last time he killed anyone was on gta part 3
stfu........no biting cause all you do is bark
i'll rip ya shit to shread's just like a fucking shark
sorry to all you watcher's just felt like getting wile
but that dont mean for that bar i had to steal his style
babble babble blah blah ya whole verse is nothing but filler
so bow out this battle's dc and you are no one else but killa...cam
o yea and i tried a new style of writing first time
Originally Posted by KkiLLa34
Ovarall u had a average verse
ur structure is good an u attemped 2 punch
6/10
good closer 6/10
tis verse was ight it needs a lil more elevatin jus a notch
come up wit more personals and a betta scructure
personals is wat stops a reader from falling asleep :ROFL:
urs is 5/10
i think tis battle needs elevatin but i think tha first dude won jus by a lil bit
^ tat explains every thing good night
v/killa
thanks fo the vote uppin #1
uppin #2 come on kids vote on this hot shit come on
Killer didn't have any strong punches. Attempted nameplay, but didn't do anything with it. Had an MC Hammer line, which is a totally wack concept.
Psykosis, didn't need to come hard. The opening bar was enough to take this.
v/Psykosis
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248970
yo when tha other kid comes bac vote my battle in tha frontlinez
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