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    Lyrical Crisis

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...25#post3480525


    yo this my first drop on the site. so peep it


    Imagine~ vodka & ~gin~ smellin like ~jasmins~/
    and that biggie & pac were just ~has beens~/
    my ~rhymes are ~rough~ my ~mind~ is on ~self destruct~
    ~sinin~ in vegas so imma throw ~my chips in~/
    ~livin~ in the desert so call me ~egyptian~/
    causin alot of ~trouble~ for ~crews~ like ~obstacles~/
    everyday is a ~struggle~ so i~do~ smoke ~optimals~/
    while bitches ~Shot They Load~ they ~Lock N Load~/
    as Souls are ~Boxed & Sold~/


    I got the lyrical ~tech nine~/
    to persuade and ~infect minds~/
    im quick to spit that ~hot shit~/
    unlocking styles like a ~locksmith~/
    lyrical crisis is the one i ~rock with~/
    the crew and i are quick to ~blast at fools~/
    for there money clips, ~cash and jewels~/
    leavin mc's slain on the ~rappin news/
    ya know we get the ~fetti right~/
    fuck these ~pettie mics~/
    swingin em like there sum ~deadly scythes~/
    man im on the mic and only ~sixteen~/
    like the ~water i ~keep clean~/
    I ~slaughter~ and ~beat phines~/
    just know this is the lyrical ~crisis~/
    killin' mic ~devices~ and anything ~righteous~/


    it still needs a chorus but i will let you be the judge of that....

    uppin for feed

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    any feed would be deeply appreciated...

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    Alright..Multi's Crazy You Are...Get Rid Of The ~~~ I Use To Do That To It Really Fucks Your Structure Up Man..Vocabulary Was Decent Some Nice Shit You Used To Rhyme With Very Good For A Newbie Here Man...Wordplay Saw Some Okay Shit In Here..No Hate..Best Newbie I Saw In A While
    Still Out For Revenge....

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    tight man thanks for the detailed feed.

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