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First Topic: What's a real Devil's Reject?
good topic...haha where do i start
deez fake niggas are....
walk around wit da gun but dey scared to spark
or u can say all deez kids dats only half thugged out
wont stab a nigga but quick to knock u da fuck out
a dumb shawty dat only whores on da weekends
tricking her temple out just tryin to meet ends
might as well be a prostitute, she gotta man
but for some doe she let u knock some boots
for lots a loot prolly go and lock ya crew
......a man that only kills for revenge
cuz his moms got merked she was forced to her end
afghanistan
Fuck Afghanistan...and Osama Bin Not gettin Laid...
Fuckin' shit up wit some Terrorism tryna get paid...
I ain't knockin on his huste but check his peoples pride...
Afghanistan wasn't shit before...and won't be shit after he dies...
No lies, Afghanistan is poor...kind of like a couple Hobos...
And as it stands now...Bush and Osama are a couple homos
Its a No NO to send all your troops across the seas...
To fight in Afghanistan...for a war thats got no need...
at least in my book...I hate how shit looks...it really sucks...
But when it all boils down, we won so who gives a fuck...
N/T= Eating Dinner With Your Girlfriends....................................... ...........
EX Boyfriends Parents....
^^^Wack topic...lets see who can make it raw...
Death to All Comers..
N/T= Eating Dinner With Your Girlfriends....................................... ...........
EX Boyfriends Parents....
^^^Wack topic...lets see who can make it raw...
as im eatin i think about how the hell i ever got to the table
i hold the fork like a weapon as i eat so im willin n able
im bout to rock this cradle if they mention my love life tonight
if they put down my girlfriend im endin a life to end up in life
theyre son played her, but they prolly think he's so special
so they tell u she fucked his best friend just to test u
im thinkin to myself, she dont seem like da type to be a ho
n u dont believe them but they insist showin video, so choices there are no other
they pop it in after dinner, n the guy shes fuckin'....is ur younger brother
NT: What ur first rap was like...
shit my first rap was like a man gettin shot,
it hit ppl like this man on my spot,
its flow,structure,and wordplay werent the best,
but when i spit them at u u still need a vest,
generic style and alot of good punches,
i worked on them a OT at lunches,
but they elevated since i spit my first ryme,
24-7 is wut i spit all tha tyme
This guy left no topic SO...I'll make one up...
topic=your room mate is cockblocking...
Ayo I'm tryna get a lil' bit, ready to take her home
She keeps whisperin in my ear, bout how shes ready to bone
i'm like yea so I call the crib and see whos there...
Even if my roomie picked it up...right now I wouldn't care...
So I took her to my spot, please believe I tried to wreck it...
But soon as I opened the door...my roomie intercepted...
He was standin in front of the tv...no draws, just butt nekkid...
Soon as he saw the girl he just walked right over...
Handed me his club sandwich and his cold club soda...
The next thing I knew I was sittin' on the couch...
Hearin my lady scream...and watchin the bed bounce...
N/T=Intimacy...with your cousins lady...
Death to All Comers..
intamicy wiht my cousins lady . lol
i didn't want to, but i did between me and you
lady was totally driving me crazy all through
i knew she wanted me, i tryed to think of you
but she always did what she do. i loved it to.
the guilt set in after my hormones stronger
then a tractor, she tricked me like an actor
seduced me so seductively i was so horny
i know my appology sounds very very corny
next topic broke
FREE AGENT
SKRIBBLING TATTOOS ALL OVER U's
broke again, reach into my pockets and theres nothing but lint in it
my electrical got shut off, along with my tv, and the internet
wack people callin my house, askin bout bills and wheres all the cash
why dont i just be honest, and say i spent my whole paycheck on hash
im writing this on a piece of paper, but this pencil is more than i can afford
oh lord, now my cars being reposesed, and its only a 95 honda accord
the thought of loosing my house is making my stomach flip flop, i grow queezy
i gotta hit the streets now, cya.. but remember, pimpin at easy....
n/t Your dieing of thirst, nothing around u but desert... what do u do?
I'm stuck in the middle of desert, with nothin to drink...
I better get somethin' quick before my adams apple shrinks
My visions getting blurry...I'd better find some in a hurry...
I'm lookin' and lookin' round...then I see somethin scurry...
I follow it with my eyes and what to my surprise...
I'm seein double of lakes surrounded by naked guys...
I don't have much of a choice...cuz shit I'm thisty as hell
I sit for a second and wish the lake were by itself
I look up again and it seems like its gone...
Along with my hopes...and my thirst growin strong...
I see a cactuse in the distance and think just for a second...
Cacti need water to survive...and then the thought reflected...
I pulled out my weapon to disect it...and thought again...
Lemme dig at the roots for the water hidden within...
i dug and dug unitl I finally reach the bottom...
and I found just little bit of substantiatin' water...
I drank for just a bit, cuz it was cupped in my hand...
then the rest evaporated, because I left it in the sand...
AWWW MAN!!!!
N/T=Getting Caught Sleeping On The Job...
Death to All Comers..
Caught sleepin on the job, omg, lol
Work, it sucks, it cooks, it fucks
Oh wait, thats my girl, she jus got me a new job
And all shes doing is sucking my cock
But i gotta go cos i got a baby comin in a month
And i don't hav a car, and i lost my old job
Cos i fell asleep and i wouldnt let Def Reaper suck my cock
So he fired me, cos i was asleep but i wasnt in the desert
With him, cos i was fuckin, givin it my best shit
And thats why i was asleep, honest
Giv me my job bitch, i'll try harder, honest
So, plz, plz, plz giv me my job, i need my pay
Cheque, so giv it me, or someday bitch you're gonna pay
Went bit off topic there, sorry
N/T = your best friends sister
Last edited by <Supreme>; November 12th, 2005 at 05:27 PM
related 2 tha bytch, his sisters domed every nigga on tha block
she hoes alot around, her pussy cant get shot, let alone 'popped'
tryin 2 get tha rock, but i put tha bytch off
cuz she cant handle the 'lines i give' on top
she shot so much heroine her heart off a needle jus drop
no beat, better 2 the world shes dead, R dot, I dot, P dot
caught up in tha game isnt easy...dis bytch had no teeth
my best friends sister had surgery to handle a qweef
related 2 tha bytch, his sisters domed every nigga on tha block
she hoes alot around, her pussy cant get shot, let alone 'popped'
tryin 2 get tha rock, but i put tha bytch off
cuz she cant handle the 'lines i give' on top
she shot so much heroine her heart off a needle jus drop
no beat, better 2 the world shes dead, R dot, I dot, P dot
caught up in tha game isnt easy...dis bytch had no teeth
my best friends sister had surgery to handle a qweef
next topic
cocaine
The white stuff I'm so in love with it...I cant get enuff
I don't care whats its mixed with long as I get to snuff...
Just pass it by the brick and lemme have my way...
O how I worship the drug that keeps me high from day to day
From the morning when I wake to the night when I lay...
I'm dreamin about this substance, the only thing that keeps me awake...
Most people are sprung by the opposite type of sex...
But me i'm sprung just off of the feeling I get...
if i was girl my clit'd be wet...but I'm guy so I just nut...
Just thinkin' about coacaine is enough to warm my gut...
n/t=getting pussy on a friday...
Death to All Comers..
damn its friday time to have wetter wetness my-way
i-play, her twat like violins fingers corress my-maid
my day is friday yall niggaz can see
i watch sum my shows and den get pussy!!!
my bed shakin lika exercist begginin
so much alike her head is spinnin~!!
big pimpin-us real niggaz know how it is..we make our call!!
2 get dat booty on friday, fuccin till saturday no blue-ballz!!!
LOL
next topic---ur first real fist fight
'Chaeta
Swing, and a miss, shit i felt i struck out/
but he missed his first blow to, his luck ran out/
got a shot straight to tha mafuckas mouth/
grabbed by the head and knocked his ass out/
homeboy came runnin, jumped from behind/
hit me on the head with that iron labeled 9/
stomped in my face and bloodied my fuckin gear/
then it stopped, my boy dun punked him from the rear/
i jumped up stumblin, and got tackled right back down/
but the bitch pushed too hard and went tumblin back around/
i switched it up and jumped right on his chest/
right elbows to his mouth and then my steel toe to his chest/
meanwhile on the otha side of the lot/
my boy ko'd that punk who swung 9 at my knot/
then a gunfire shot, we all dropped and what i saw/
"anything you say will be used against you in the court of law"
N/T Your defense in the courtdate from up above^^
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