Championship: Young P (8-3) Vs. Feeble Minded (8-2)

[Mystery~Murdera]

regular rules,
3 links = 3 votes
no freeposting
Verses Due Fri. 12EST
Voting Ends on Monday


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[Richard Parker]

sup yo, i got some personals for you hit me up on aim

18 lines

[Young Philly]

Word
How many lines?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247524
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247522
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247526

[Richard Parker]

sorry 12. did my best but im busy - I had my verse saved in PM form, but emerge erased the entire PM database. So here goes, again:

man this is my first line, destroying you, it aint far from closure
when I see philly i'll give embraces, to wear after my first bar is over
cuz I've predicted the outcome.. no excuse, ya scripture is solved
so after this go bitch how you'd win if there was a picture involved
you aint dope, league'll betray you - you cant delay the knife..
Phillys fighting fit.. cuz for him crying about losing is a way of life
I'll take a tip from the Catholic Church, after rejecting ya game
call this ya confirmation battle, and go build yourself a respectable name
ya reps broken, a modern day token, boasting and shattered
more or less, in your verses your always posting the latter
no job, no problems.. u need an extension? ill sever ya chance
you struggle for words, in the direction you've never advanced

[Young Philly]

Can we get those erased? Thanks.

Fuck it son, I'll come at you with the meanest shit
This battles a gag...& that was my reaction when I seen ya bitch
I thought that last punch was cool, it was basic and true
But I can take crit., u just bitch every week about him "hating on you"
^I just used a bland personal, but I speak like a pro
& it's cool...since you fucking did it THREE WEEKS IN A ROW
'You got some years under ya belt', but you ain't hard dog
^That just a nice way of saying ur old...like most of ur bars are
You don't wanna say some shit, try it son and I'm wreckin
But the die is cast...
so now the first'll happen to you, or u'll end up in a giant one of the second
I'm like the Sheriff of this shit, this bastards a bitch
Plus Calgon is what I say when his mom leaves after I hit

[Blackflags]

Yeah....OK.....No Comparison!!! Seriously,

man this is my first line, destroying you, it aint far from closure
when I see philly i'll give embraces, to wear after my first bar is over
cuz I've predicted the outcome.. no excuse, ya scripture is solved
so after this go bitch how you'd win if there was a picture involved
ya reps broken, a modern day token, boasting and shattered
more or less, in your verses your always posting the latter
no job, no problems.. u need an extension? ill sever ya chance
you struggle for words, in the direction you've never advanced


vs.


^I just used a bland personal, but I speak like a pro
& it's cool...since you fucking did it THREE WEEKS IN A ROW

^ That Was Like Your Best Line Kid.....And What's With All The "^^^" Shit?? Most Of Us Graduated High School Son, So Chnaces Are, We'll Get Your Punches!!!


Anyways...Feebs Took This Hands Down With Extremely Harder Hitting Punches!!!



V/ Feebs!!


Pz.

[Violent.]

man this is my first line, destroying you, it aint far from closure
when I see philly i'll give embraces, to wear after my first bar is over
Dopeness
cuz I've predicted the outcome.. no excuse, ya scripture is solved
so after this go bitch how you'd win if there was a picture involved
Meh, Its ight
you aint dope, league'll betray you - you cant delay the knife..
Phillys fighting fit.. cuz for him crying about losing is a way of life
NAh, not feelin
I'll take a tip from the Catholic Church, after rejecting ya game
call this ya confirmation battle, and go build yourself a respectable name
Nice
ya reps broken, a modern day token, boasting and shattered
more or less, in your verses your always posting the latter
Nah not feelin
no job, no problems.. u need an extension? ill sever ya chance
you struggle for words, in the direction you've never advanced
Cool

Vs

Fuck it son, I'll come at you with the meanest shit
This battles a gag...& that was my reaction when I seen ya bitch
Lol, Dopeness
I thought that last punch was cool, it was basic and true
But I can take crit., u just bitch every week about him "hating on you"
Nice personal
^I just used a bland personal, but I speak like a pro
& it's cool...since you fucking did it THREE WEEKS IN A ROW
Nah, Not feelin
'You got some years under ya belt', but you ain't hard dog
^That just a nice way of saying ur old...like most of ur bars are
Nice
You don't wanna say some shit, try it son and I'm wreckin
But the die is cast...
so now the first'll happen to you, or u'll end up in a giant one of the second
LMFAO, Dope
I'm like the Sheriff of this shit, this bastards a bitch
Plus Calgon is what I say when his mom leaves after I hit
Meh. Its ight i spose

Ive seen feebs come much better in previous weeks, Philly came pretty nice.
Both were consistent, but i think Philly pulled this off.

V/Philly

[Mystery~Murdera]

How does the champ battle not get votes?

uppin

[Bullet Point]

man this is my first line, destroying you, it aint far from closure
when I see philly i'll give embraces, to wear after my first bar is over
ya reps broken, a modern day token, boasting and shattered
more or less, in your verses your always posting the latter

vs.

I thought that last punch was cool, it was basic and true
But I can take crit., u just bitch every week about him "hating on you"
You don't wanna say some shit, try it son and I'm wreckin
But the die is cast...
so now the first'll happen to you, or u'll end up in a giant one of the second

its a tie but i thought feebs picture involved punch was funny so...

v/ feebs

[Erupt]

man this is my first line, destroying you, it aint far from closure
when I see philly i'll give embraces, to wear after my first bar is over
ya reps broken, a modern day token, boasting and shattered
more or less, in your verses your always posting the latter

vs

^I just used a bland personal, but I speak like a pro
& it's cool...since you fucking did it THREE WEEKS IN A ROW


vote feebs... pretty easily

[Born To Kill]

man this is my first line, destroying you, it aint far from closure
when I see philly i'll give embraces, to wear after my first bar is over
Eh...shoulda led in better, used a teeth reference...still nice...
cuz I've predicted the outcome.. no excuse, ya scripture is solved
so after this go bitch how you'd win if there was a picture involved
Eh...so-so...
you aint dope, league'll betray you - you cant delay the knife..
Phillys fighting fit.. cuz for him crying about losing is a way of life
Eh...decent, nothing great.
I'll take a tip from the Catholic Church, after rejecting ya game
call this ya confirmation battle, and go build yourself a respectable name
Eh...not much of a punch.
ya reps broken, a modern day token, boasting and shattered
more or less, in your verses your always posting the latter
Real nice!
no job, no problems.. u need an extension? ill sever ya chance
you struggle for words, in the direction you've never advanced
Eh...cool ending...wording coulda been better, I think.

VS

Fuck it son, I'll come at you with the meanest shit
This battles a gag...& that was my reaction when I seen ya bitch
Eh...cool opener...seen better though...
I thought that last punch was cool, it was basic and true
But I can take crit., u just bitch every week about him "hating on you"
Blah!
^I just used a bland personal, but I speak like a pro
& it's cool...since you fucking did it THREE WEEKS IN A ROW
Funny...
'You got some years under ya belt', but you ain't hard dog
^That just a nice way of saying ur old...like most of ur bars are
Eh...blah to decent...not much punch though...
You don't wanna say some shit, try it son and I'm wreckin
But the die is cast...
so now the first'll happen to you, or u'll end up in a giant one of the second
Real nice!
I'm like the Sheriff of this shit, this bastards a bitch
Plus Calgon is what I say when his mom leaves after I hit
Blah!

I though P won this...

Barely...both provided ass instead of verses...

But I think I liked 2 bars from P, only one stood out for Feebs.

Barely...Vote: Young P

Peace

[Richard Parker]

about the picture thing - P is always saying how he's so good at picture battles or something, thats what that personal was for. it didnt seem like anybody knew where that line came from. . just clearing it up

good battle p

[Saul.Goode]

man this is my first line, destroying you, it aint far from closure
when I see philly i'll give embraces, to wear after my first bar is over
you aint dope, league'll betray you - you cant delay the knife..
Phillys fighting fit.. cuz for him crying about losing is a way of life
I'll take a tip from the Catholic Church, after rejecting ya game
call this ya confirmation battle, and go build yourself a respectable name

vs

^I just used a bland personal, but I speak like a pro
& it's cool...since you fucking did it THREE WEEKS IN A ROW

Feebs took this one easily, P didnt bring is usually consistent verse. i know he has another champ match going on so maybe thats why it wasnt his best.

[Mystery~Murdera]

Feeble wins (9-2)
& Young P loses (8-4)