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    God's Son

    ITS PRETTY LONG BUT THIS IS WHAT I HAVE TO SAY



    Because I'm one of God's sons throughout my body love runs,
    faster than Micheal Johnson's time in the four hun.
    Because I'm one of God's sons my life is never ordinary.
    Contrary to what this world think says or does my life is lead by, directed by, protected by his blood.
    My ex- goal was to be public enemy number one
    You see I've 180ed because I'm one of Gods sons
    Now I know I've always been the public's enemy, wanting my money fexed on rush delivery.
    Repercussions got my spirit crushed, Lord deliver me.
    Because I'm one of God's sons I walk by faith.
    I through you determine my destiny.
    You through I determine my fate.
    It so easy to tell you the right path.
    Personally walking it's the difficult task.
    Time taught me to take off the masks.
    Reveal the truth, reveal myself,
    Stopped hiding behind an image, cars, females, and wealth.
    Obessions of worldly possesions got me confessin' I ain't learned my lesson.
    I guess it's you testing, but I'm so good at messing--up, pressing my luck.
    N.I.G.G.A. nonsense, God is everywhere so luck was there.
    Coincidences are preordained therefore I live in leisure.
    Everyday is a suprise, to hell with a daily procedure.
    Yet they measure my importance on a scale of success.
    Well, I was sucessful in crime without an arrest.
    Does that make my life worth less,
    than a law abiding citizen?
    I abide by His laws not by laws that say we trust in Him.
    If that were true, why have government?
    The man got me bent,
    Novous Odous Selectrum should've been a hint.
    It's revelations that's plan as day.
    28 degrees yesterday,
    78 degrees today,
    Hailing in the middle of May,
    But it was sunny earlier that day.
    Ay! Ay!! Ay!!! I haven't begun to scatch the surface.
    You claim you've been educating our youth.
    If you cirriculm consists of lies,
    don't expect pupils to tell truth.
    Teachers teach us to be ants and work for the good of the colony.
    Never telling that it was built on bullshit schemes and robberies.
    By the way who wrote these history books and who did they answer to?
    Did they conceal information or change their points of view?
    Were they one of Gods sons or an opposing force
    Did they get their information from a soldiers report?
    I felt I had to ask these questions,
    highschool was boring me.
    teacher would reply, "Don't question my authority"
    It always been a game to make us feel we have to play, have to win.
    Work all day to keep money coming in.
    As long as were preoccupied with our own lives,
    we'll never have the time to revolutionize.
    Too many choose not to care.
    I guess your afraid.
    I'm scared everyday, but never afraid.
    More concerned with my soul being saved,
    and my road being paved.
    Its seems as though we'd rather lust for getting paid.
    I must admit Lucifer looks to be peeking,
    because I'm one of God's sons my focus won't weaking.
    I'm seeking happiness from a universal perspective;
    earth can't fulfill my requirements, it's more like an elective.
    Combined science with religon, it eqaulled spirituality.
    Figured out when God blesses he works through reality.
    Since Lucifer's peeking I guess his time's winding down.
    He wants as many souls as possible before he's hellbound.
    Do your thang playa, have your fun
    You ain't penetrating me, cause I'm one of Gods sons.
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    i disliked it in parts and liked it in others

    i disliked all the thoughts thrown into one cluttered bowl
    i think maybe it would have been better for you to take each individual piece and elaborate on it in its each individual stanza get what i mean
    it flowed on from one thought to another with know real description and elaboration on each thing.

    however some of the lines i did like where as follows:If you cirriculm consists of lies,
    don't expect pupils to tell truth.


    Since Lucifer's peeking I guess his time's winding down.
    He wants as many souls as possible before he's hellbound.


    really nice parts but it didnt fit as a whole to me


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    it was decent way too long in my opinion...you could've cut it short.....lots of imagry to me.....decent vocab....it was an allright peice man....goodjob Reply on mine please

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    This would've been DOPE, if it was shorter.
    Leave some shit out, put the more important parts of what you want in.
    And anythin' else out, and then work it all out and that'd be dope.
    But i didn't enjoy such a long scattered read.
    Keep up.

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    Thanks For The Honest Feed People Keep Em Comin And I'll Have More To Come Based On The Things I Need To Improve But I Agree Wit You Guys This Shit Is Long As Hell
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    this piece was okay...but it was'nt really a poetry type, and it was knid of long, the structure was str8, the concept was clear to read.....5.4/10
    word* peep my poem in my sig........

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    It was a pretty good poem! very inspirational but some stuff could have been left out

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