good battle u guys r dope
M.O.U.S.E.
!.VeRbZ.!
good battle u guys r dope
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im votin for mouse cuase his metaphors were better and he had a good rhyme scheme
verbs would probably be alot better if his satructure was better but it wasso ugly
so i choose mouse
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!.VeRbZ.!, you lead this battle with clever wordplay. You structure was a little had to follow, but I was still able to detect the rhyme scheme on your verse. Punches didnt hit very hard though. If his name was roach or insect, this verse was have got him. MOUSE had harder hitting punchlines in this battle. This is one of his best verses. Nice personalized verse dropped...
Vote - MOUSE
mouse won this cause he had better punches and creativity
verbz cme on i know u can do better than that try comin harder next time
CockRoach ass bitch~fuck punches for this fag i'll have to bring out da raid
Oh n yea i agree there are good letters comin out ya mouth ma D.N.A.
(alright punch)
Punches thumpin'~try to render the fact they'll be random stomping
This kid thought if he put periods between the letters in his name
........................................He would STAND for something
(alright personal)
His tracks?..not real text is his life check his crew 2 n thats a fact we already ran that
I aint shootn bullets?..thats cuz u got so many PERIODS in ya name
...........................................I fuckin decided to shoot TAMPAX
(lol good personal)
You spittin?..well with that shit you should cover your mouth thats just rude
RB voters no ya feed~its like they allergies action up when they see ya verse A*CHEW
(dint like that much)
What a faker~ Punish work was the only time this kid was fukn wit pen n paper
Would break his jaw~But wit da wack shit dat come out his mouth it wud be a favor
(aight ending)
VS
Goin to see verbz perform is like ya brains under a mistletoe
Kiss the thought goodbye cause like his list...theres no shows
(good beginning)
Under his crew roster's an imposter..me in ya crew i doubt it
Wanted me to join.......i hit um wit the "meh ill think about it"
(good personal)
Im in and blend with surrroundings....two verbs i can lend
Says gangsta in ya sig so i guess his verb here is pretend
(good punch)
Ive heard of black ballin artists but they neva wanted you listed
Wanted you out for good so avatar shows that you got black fisted
(hah, nice punch)
He posts his verse quick as hell take some time heres some motivation
Cause if you takin action......your words shouldnt need an explination
(ok...naw)
You underestimated me..................now its like do or die
Put it under ya list..................Verbz for a closed suicide
(good ending)
Well id say personals and flow go to mouse and id say verbz
took vocab.... uhh.. mouse takes structure and i felt
like his verse was funnier and more enjoyable to he gets
my vote....
V/ MOUSE
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