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    Doppleganger Reflections

    Watch closely..a killa's eyes capture vanilla skies,
    window's of ya soul closed by the fractured sill of lies,
    We sat….still and sighed in relief yet I cried in my sleep,
    when word of ya death was whispered thru the aisle of the beast.
    You needed to find a new leaf to turn before dying at least,
    but ya head was lyin' too deep, in the game to be pried from her teeth.
    Blaming myself, or the system for leadin' ya mind astray
    I was working 'round the clock, and couldn't give you the time of day
    while wishin' to find a way to balance, our sands of the hourglass
    Is it true that when April, showers pass you hear flowers laugh,
    at the drops of rain, to stop the pain brought on by God's sour half?
    The tower's crashed, but so did my soul, low and behold,
    We're both dead as the seas walked by Jesus, wrote in the scrolls
    I took the straight and narrow path, you've broken the mold
    So it was told, I raised you better but you chose a new road
    to follow…and I only see as far as dharma's revealin'
    but you've done ya dirt, now ya gettin' bit by Karma's chameleon
    On a two way street, both refusin' to open our eyes
    still you're my reflection, the blue color of oceans and sky…..
    caused by the sun, and ya earth orbits a motion of crime
    quick stare at death..two images…both of 'em, mine.

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    Damn.....nice.....wordplay......multies......metaz ..... doesnt alwayz flow...but still nice... U need to reply to 2 other katz and post linkz in here or it will get closed... also I see this is your only post...... if u want replies u gotta give them ...more then the 2 in for the rulez

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    You need 2 links to 2 open mics you've left decent feedback on or this will be closed. Read the thread at the top of the forum if you don't know how. If you up this again without links it will be closed.

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