move like a unseen shadow
cry no emotion bleed no blood
unforgivable soul think beyond
head full of imagable thing's
need your love like a newborn
makeout with death everyday
incredible thoughts dreams are reality
god's son but cool wit the devil
wife is a guardian angel
different personalitys got 4 hearts
get high of sisqo drunk of haze
never sleep restless young I'ma fanasty
just made this up right now
know its short but feedback won't hurt............dammit
should be move like an unseen shadow, this peice was very abstract... semmed like the only person who could point out the direction would be you, had some nice vocab and made you think which is great, decent poem here keep at it, you have some talent thats easy to see, keep it up :POriginally Posted by young hov
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