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Thread: ..::The Diaries::.. (4 Way Collab)

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    Vamp - the complexity in your verse was pretty nice. For the most part, I think the posistioning in your verse was on point. Good story from your view
    Vafinest - You flow was very consistant. The over usage of the word "I" was pretty acceptable because it gave some authencity to your verse.
    Spekz - Your verse lured in the target audience. You did a great job of hooking the audience with this creative introduction. Great flow.
    *~Big Nash~* - Ya word choices were very highly favorable.. You were very creative in your writing and used a solid structure and held up the finale of this writing

    kinda lazy.....^^^ what i thought
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    thanks for the feedback

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    Quote Originally Posted by vafinest
    thanks for the feedback
    u kno me..............
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    word uppin for more feedback on this dope piece

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    Dope

    Speks you might be a newb. But you got heart and skill bro.

    Vamp, nash and va. good job bringing this bigga into the industry. He might be something.
    - LIL THUG

    ^^appreciate that thug, its great 2 hear that ppl think im doin something right, also props to the other 3...thanx again means a lot

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    come on dope piece right here

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    Uppin this beauty...Vamp Comment on the other verses if you check this dude... LOL....Nice work guys...Uppin this Beast.......THANKS FOR FEED...


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    uppin this dope piece

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    damn....yall all did a great job with emotion and the tpics were all portrayted very well...Big Nash and VA had sum excellent pieces...to me those were the verses most emotional and overall great...the structures was good, voacab, and everything...this is one of the best OM i seen ina long time..
    NCred aka Cyrious

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    thanks for the feedback

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    uppin 4 some good feedback

    its dope

    its worth the read

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    Holy shit this was dope. I really loved the use of words in every ones verses. I liked how everyone had a different take and how Nash finished it off with awesome structure and flow. The storylines were interesting, sometimes a bit confusing, but then the detail put me right back on track. I think everyone did a great job on this collab and this should happen more. Keep writing ya'll. Leave some feed on my OM's...im sorta speechless right now lol

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    thanks for the feedback

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    Yeah thanks Rile...We dope...Uppin for more feed.......

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    yea dope piece form all of ya, good job, had nice creativty and complexity...

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