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Thread: umm im new? tell me what you think

  1. #1
    Newbie crypto_killa's Avatar
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    umm im new? tell me what you think

    when i pick up the mic u can start the subtraction
    cos im a threat to your life like adverse reaction
    and i stick it to your crew like ion attraction
    i can bring it in halves or whole like mathematical fractions
    now start the retractions
    because im takin it back
    and thanks to all those that said what i spitted was wack
    now i start the attack
    like a natural
    all this talk like I am bashful
    i snatch souls quicker than a spinning axel
    u know what happens to bodies that dont got a soul?
    they get damned to hades where they under my control
    which is basically hell
    for your reticulum cell
    id like to drink the blood that propelled from your head swell
    id hang tounges on the wall for my ideal occupation
    and leave u misunderstood like u got mental retardation
    u wack mc's move to cellars for deep contimplation
    and then once u spit want a standing ovation
    my revelation
    predicts my lyrical prodigy
    make u commit suicide like the sirens did in oddessy
    i gotta make a confession
    killin' mc's is my ultimate profession
    don't blame me cos u rap with viewer discretion
    try to battle me and get made into an urban legend.

  2. #2
    shyboi
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    that shit was tight mad props needed a lil work on the structure u no and that shit was deap i like that shit keep elevatin that was chill
    is u a free agent

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    Newbie crypto_killa's Avatar
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    thanks man... i have some of my shit lyin around so thought i would just post it and see what i people thought... all criticisim is greatly appericated... and i dont know what you mean by free agent but prolly

  4. #4
    shyboi
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    yeah u is so if u down go post a tryout in DARK SIDE CLIQ tyrout page in the crews and hook up part and ill let u in ight holla or just tell me if u want in now and ill add
    u ight holla

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    Newbie crypto_killa's Avatar
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    ill go post a try out and see what yall think thanks for the hook hommie

  6. #6
    shyboi
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    ight no problem we sshould collab on a song ight hit me up

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    I think you need to read the rules before you post again.

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