iight 10 lines
10 mins to check
30 minute time limit after check
.......hmm J.L u sound like an alias.who are you?
dont matter jus check yo ass in here
J.L.
Sin.
iight 10 lines
10 mins to check
30 minute time limit after check
.......hmm J.L u sound like an alias.who are you?
dont matter jus check yo ass in here
ight...
lets do this thing
CHiN ChecK, lets go.
-Lyrical Darkness-
'ya need more trainin, young ones,'
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iight check
murder by text...thats how i put him in lyrical darkness
now you a marked bitch...J.L. flows like garbage
Chincheck.....you better go ahead n check ya chin
cuz the cums stain remains from last night dik suckin
this dude 22... illiterate and ugly too
J.L claims t b sick.....
...but only if he pukes
i've figured out what ya means...Just Lose n quit
i heard he was forced to give his dad head... n didnt choose to spit
the truth is this..... he's lame n could drop a line hot
but give him credit for tryin to punch me....me took 9 shots
the truth is this..... he's lame n could drop a line hot
but give him credit for tryin to punch me....He took 9 shots
i had to fix dis
***
the boy talks bout flow, but where the fuck does his lines match?!
Sin's tight as elderly snatch n the bitch is as fly as a wing-less gnat
face facts Im ur Lord, and everyone knows that Sin's no match for me
his only crack's that im 22...'ooh snap', ya got me?... (pfft)
player...retire, ur too whack as fuck
u wonder why ur a noweight? thats cuz ur punches are so weak as fuck
leave the heathen dead to the grave,slice his ass up chops-to-the-knave
ull got more chance playin chicken against walls, its like im battling Courtney Day
Kill this Dr.Doomsday nigga, his shyts pathetic n his skills amisbal
Murked by J.L., bitch im the real Mr.SiNister
***
ight im done, p'z out
-Lyrical Darkness-
'ya need more trainin, young ones,'
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up'n
murder by text...thats how i put him in lyrical darkness
now you a marked bitch...J.L. flows like garbage
Chincheck.....you better go ahead n check ya chin
cuz the cums stain remains from last night dik suckin
this dude 22... illiterate and ugly too
J.L claims t b sick.....
...but only if he pukes
i've figured out what ya means...Just Lose n quit
i heard he was forced to give his dad head... n didnt choose to spit
the truth is this..... he's lame n could drop a line hot
but give him credit for tryin to punch me....me took 9 shots
good punches. structure was good it flowed well. 8/10
vs
the boy talks bout flow, but where the fuck does his lines match?!
Sin's tight as elderly snatch n the bitch is as fly as a wing-less gnat
face facts Im ur Lord, and everyone knows that Sin's no match for me
his only crack's that im 22...'ooh snap', ya got me?... (pfft)
player...retire, ur too whack as fuck
u wonder why ur a noweight? thats cuz ur punches are so weak as fuck
leave the heathen dead to the grave,slice his ass up chops-to-the-knave
ull got more chance playin chicken against walls, its like im battling Courtney Day
Kill this Dr.Doomsday nigga, his shyts pathetic n his skills amisbal
Murked by J.L., bitch im the real Mr.SiNister
***
u used alot of words that dont rhyme and also u used me twice in one bar.flows ok but structures messed up 4/10
sin took this battle with a better spit.harder punches
Sin takes this shit easy he acually had some ok punches and his srtucture wasnt fucked more than a prostitute....hmm J.L ...go fix your structure and have fun...aight easly sin btw
V/Sin
Move on , no irony here.
...hmm yea my shyt did sound a lil off...but whats up wit the structure though?
Bump!
-Lyrical Darkness-
'ya need more trainin, young ones,'
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...hold the fuck up....Lyrical Minds n Sin. is the same fuckn person...the fuck is this conspiracy shyt man, u need to sway votes? Fuck this shyt if this nigga cheatin thn fuck it get this shyt DQ'ed man cuz thts some fuckn pussy ass shyt!!
-Lyrical Darkness-
'ya need more trainin, young ones,'
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how is lyrical minds me. your fucked. u ever see his rhymes gimme a break.
up'n
looks like the same fuckn IP to me kidd...or is it just me?
-Lyrical Darkness-
'ya need more trainin, young ones,'
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Lyrical mind and Sin have the same IP..you voted for yourself.
Soon to be banned..and win given to J.L
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