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    Criticize Diz!

    Im kinda pissed cuz my last open mic got closed/
    under 16 lines so it didnt get a chance to blow/
    so im home spending my time extending my flo/
    and adding a couple of names to my long list of foes/
    but yall should kno not to judge wut u cant defeat/
    ya'll couldnt take me if i asked u for a ride to the beach/
    a born elite who hasnt been discovered by R.B/
    but in the streets known as the legendary MC/
    to rip ur heart out like if this was open heart surgery/
    u heard of me but couldnt murder me cuz ur uncertainty/
    let ur conscience be ur guide to ur body leaking burgundy/
    im learning these battle tactics from self experience/
    that why u stuck at the bottom when im on top of pyramids/
    spitting words off the brian, while yall be looking for synonyms/
    having bitches on my dick as if the shyt was made of cinnamon/
    given'em just a bit more then wut they can handle/
    system overload! as ur rhymes begin to dismantle/
    i trample on ur poor attempts of writing ur rhymes lyrically/
    then come back and knock on ur door to finish the job physically/
    u'd probably catch the flu if u were within in my vicinity/
    thats how sick i be...chyperin...spittin a free/
    so all should watch as rap battles forms into my killing spree/
    Last edited by ...LEGACY...; November 4th, 2005 at 12:27 AM
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics you've left decent feedback on or this will be closed. Read the thread at the top of the forum if you don't know how. If you up this again without links it will be closed.

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    it was cool i liked the flow and vocab alot

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    rhymes were pretty good homie.....
    flow was smooth and strucutre was even through out
    topic was cool..i liked it...nicely done
    vocab could hav been upped to mor complex but..
    this was till a pretty good drop..i liiked it
    overall i say this is ike a 8.2/10....keep it up
    peace homie................

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