To The Woman Of My Dreams

[~lextownkillaz~]

You’re the woman of my dreams, sometimes it seems that life can get no worse , then I talk to u and everything gets better, its like the sun is out even in the wettest weather, you own the key to my heart, I’ve loved you from the very start, and if I couldn’t be with you then I wouldn’t want anyone, someday I want you to have my daughter and son, you give me hope, inspiration, and all that applies, you give me what I need to get by when I look directly in your eyes, you make my life complete, all I want is for us not to compete about who loves who more, with out you my life would be a bore, so for being in my life I thank you very much, because I love everything about you down to the touch…………….

To be continued

[HaZy]

awwwwwwwww
*heart melts*

well all i can say is that your not gonna have a daughter and son
your gonna have 2 daughters lol
that'll teach u a life lesson

now on to the poem it kinda got jumbled together in teh wettest weather section it was a great line that should have been emphazised a bit better

this is the kinda poem you would write on a pink heart and put in a white envelope and send to her on valentines day
beautiful

[Floetry]

"its like the sun is out even in the wettest weather" This line was good ,but as the last guy said needed to be emphasized more.Overall I liked the poem it was very heart warming. And the thought that its continued wants to make me read the rest o;nceits done.In the meantime comment me on my "TRUE COLORS" poem. I'm trying hard to find out what i need to do to become a better poem writer.~peace~

[~lextownkillaz~]

aight and thanx for the feed.....................,.

[~lextownkillaz~]

uppin for feed...........im workin on the continued part as we speak

[~lextownkillaz~]

uppin for more feedback...........................