Now I lay down and relise that ive fucked up
how can i have a child
when ima child my-self sixteen years old
and my girl friend is fifteen
now ive created a life
and now have resonsability takeing care of my son or daughter
and i think why even bother
because i love this girl
thats now careing my seed in side deeply
and the first thing
i want my child to see is..... well me!?!?!?
well
i dont kno so much bout this one
i think you had good intentions
but i dont think you pursued it in quite the write way
maybe i just didnt get the vibe after previously just reading your last 2
tho i wish u the best persay that you realyl are having a kid
ive already been there i have a 9 month old handsome devil
It Was Short
But U Exprss Ya Feelin And Get Points For That But U Jus Need More Conclude
Str8 Drop
I Give It An
6.5/10
Originally Posted by LaHaze
she is shes 5 1/2 months along
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I give it a 6/10. It was short and the main reason why is cause i mean if u really are bout to have a child from a woman u have a relationship with.You should really be more emotional than this,there should be thoughts rageing through your head.Bout how your thinkin of the whole deal. I wanted more about what your thinkin about in terms of your future and how your parents are reacting and the whole story. Should of been much longer.In the meantime comment me on my "TRUE COLORS" poem. I'm trying hard to find out what i need to do to become a better poem writer.~peace~
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